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Photo posted by Igor Doncov in the Landscape gallery on 01/01/18 at 7:14 pm EST
Registered on 11/22/14, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Post last edited by Igor Doncov on 01/07/18 at 2:24 pm EST

Thank you for the comments on the last Alaska image. They were helpful.

My local friends and neighbors respond well to this seascape. Taken between Pescadero and San Gregorio facing north it captures a mood that many of us coasters have grown to like. This is a typical winter day there with a high cloud layer and wind that creates a haze. I'm curious what you think of this.

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Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on 01/01/18 at 8:05 pm EST    
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I like your title! sad I can see why your friends respond to the image.  Maybe it's the dreamy feel that the mist creates, no distinct horizon and a view into infinity.  I thinking living in this area and experiencing it on a regular basis also helps a view relate to the location and image.  While the lighting is flat, that seems vital to create the mood you were after here.  Maybe wish I could see more of the relief of the coast, but probably not visible from this angle and vantage point.  Might consider cropping the very top dark cloud off the top - draws my eye up there a bit too much.  Would hate to be caught on this beach at high tide.

  
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Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on 01/01/18 at 8:14 pm EST    
Registered on 11/01/03, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments

This has a nice mood, Igor. You might consider cloning that dark spot near the bottom of the second cliff. I like the muted color, and the tones. The processing looks real nice to me.
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Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on 01/01/18 at 8:27 pm EST    
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A thought would be to try a square crop removing the darker UR cloud.

  
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Comment posted by Gary Minish on 01/01/18 at 8:48 pm EST    
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A beautiful shorescape with lots of depth.  I like the clarity of the near cliffs and there is just enough detail visibility in the far distant, background shoreline to extend the depth of the scene even further.  Nicely done, Igor!

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Comment posted by Peter Richter on 01/02/18 at 01:29 am EST    
Registered on 11/10/10, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment last edited by Peter Richter on 01/02/18 at 01:29 am EST

Igor, it is the combination of dynamics and mystery that bring this image to life for me. I think the diagonals within the square format accentuate the dynamics aptly. The absence of a clearcut horizon keeps me exploring the moving sea vanishing in the distance.

There is only one minor technical aspect I wanted to mention: the edges of the cliffs appear a bit oversharpened to my eye and thereby disrupt the overall atmosphere of the image for me - it should be easy to fix if you go along with that.

Thanks for sharing your experience of this moment!

Peter

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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on 01/02/18 at 02:55 am EST    
Registered on 11/22/14, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments

You are absolutely right about the haloing, Peter. Unfortunately many of my images have that and it's not that easy to fix. They are formed by using the quick select tool and making adjustments within selected area. This always leaves visible halo between edges with great tonal difference. Recently, less than a week ago, I found settings that will feather and smooth these borders supposedly. The reason these fixes will be difficult to reproduce is that I didn't make these changes with layers. Multiple changes are made to a file before it's saved, without a historical record. My workflow really sucks. 

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Comment posted by Bill Chambers on 01/02/18 at 5:22 pm EST    
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Living on the gulf coast of Florida I'm always amazed to see the beauty of the west coast.  I can only imagine how nice it would be to be down there on the sand, all alone, to experience it.  I love the depth to this image, like it goes on forever; it lets my imagination run wild.

While I like this a lot to view and enjoy, I don't think I would consider this in the same league as your more artistic images.

  
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Gulf Breeze, Florida
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Comment posted by Ian Cameron on 01/02/18 at 7:03 pm EST    
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Gorgeous and gentle colour palette of opposing hues of around the same strength. Very pleasing to the eye.

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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on 01/02/18 at 7:31 pm EST    
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So pleasing to view this. Excellent composition and I love the feel / mood this has. The colors are wonderful.

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Lone Rock, WI.

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Comment posted by Ed Lowe on 01/03/18 at 5:02 pm EST    
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The subdued lighting and colors work beautifully for this seascape, Igor. This has such a relaxing feel to it and I like the way the BG shoreline and cliffs fade into the clouds. My only suggestion would be to clone out that one dark piece of driftwood? I can see why your friends and neighbors enjoy this view.

Ed

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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on 01/03/18 at 5:32 pm EST    
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Outstanding coastal scenic Igor. For me, this captures the essence of the coast - most especially because of the sea mist/spay that's creating all that atmosphere.  I don't mind, and in fact like the cloud up top - it's not so dark that it's distracting, just a nice dark gray to give the sky/clouds some contrast and definition.

The only suggestion I have would be to reduce the darkness of the tree line(s) on far bluff tops, as well as the darker part of the nearer ridge, at the same height.  The darkness right in that small area takes away, I think, from the overall misty and light atmosphere.

My workflow really sucks.

LOL.. I think we all have our own habits that we haven't bothered to check out of yet and maybe should. ;-)  I was just going to mention that I rarely make selections for the exact reason you mention.  Well, I guess I don't count TK's Luminosity masks... but I think you know what I mean.  In my workflow (please note, does not mean mine is any good, correct, or whatever, so take with grain of salt,) I typically make adjustments on an adjustment layer, whether it's hue/sat, levels/curves, selective color, b&w, etc. etc. - and make the adjustment I want to take care of a specific area. Then I simply mask the changes in or out and then paint them in/out with a soft brush and vary the opacity as needed.  Anyway, I like painting rather than hard selections as I feel at least a tiny bit more creative.  YMMV.

Love the image.

Lon

  

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Comment posted by scott lanz on 01/04/18 at 10:03 am EST    
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Beautiful seascape, Igor. Nice balance between moody/stormy and inviting. What I most like is the loneliness of the beach, which adds to the mood and gives this a sense of wildness.  

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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on 01/06/18 at 3:27 pm EST    
Registered on 11/22/14, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments

Lon, good catch on the trees up above. When I blew it up to 300% it showed the my adjustment selection had been sloppy and had included some of the trees. To be honest I know longer remember why I had dodged that cliff below but it caught the trees above. I corrected that to remove the abrupt tone variation in those trees.

I'm not sure which object others were referring to below. There's a tree stump and an overgrown rock. I took a guess and removed the stump.

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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on 01/07/18 at 2:04 pm EST    
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Beautiful coastal scene, Igor. Love the subdued colors and mood of the image. Excellent image. 

  
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Comment posted by Anil Rao on 01/08/18 at 03:25 am EST    
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Comment last edited by Anil Rao on 01/08/18 at 03:29 am EST

Yep, this is what us "coasters" live for. A really powerful visual statement of my favorite place in the world. You have captured its essence in the most sincere and beautiful manner.

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Santa Clara, California

 
   

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