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Photo posted by Lon Overacker in the Landscape gallery on 10/28/17 at 3:42 pm EST
Registered on 11/24/06, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Post last edited by Lon Overacker on 10/29/17 at 12:58 am EST
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To photograph is to hold one's breath, when all faculties converge to capture fleeting reality. It's at that precise moment that mastering an image becomes a great physical and intellectual joy. -Henri Cartier-Bresson
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Comment posted by Ed Lowe on 10/28/17 at 3:50 pm EST
Registered on 02/07/04, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
You have probably started a trend here with the aspen, Lon. The poor dogwood will probably be relegated to an afterthought.  Seriously though this is beautifully done as the blend looks pretty seamless to me and your SS choice has created some wonderful details in the water. No suggestions from me.
Ed
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Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on 10/28/17 at 4:12 pm EST
Registered on 05/28/04, 114 Posts, 2890 Comments
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Lon, the blend looks good to my eye. The composition also looks good and frames the rocks and the cascades nicely. Beautifully done!
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Brian Schrayer
Nashville, TN
"The mountains sing your glory, hallelujah, the canyons echo sweet amazing grace. My spirit sails the mighty gales are bellowing your name, and I've got nothing to say." Andrew Peterson, "Nothing to Say" |
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Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on 10/28/17 at 5:21 pm EST
Registered on 11/01/03, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
You did a fine job on this, Lon. The blend looks really well done. The color looks great, and the water flow has plenty of nice texture. My only suggestion would be to clone out the rock in the very upper left corner. Other than that, this is really fine work!
--P
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Preston Birdwell
Columbia, California, USA
NPN 429 | California Nature Photographers (CANP) Moderator | 'NPN Discussion' Moderator
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on 10/28/17 at 5:30 pm EST
Registered on 11/19/03, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
This turned out really well. Blend looks great to my eye. It must have been tedious to manually blend it. I would agree with Preston's suggestion on the clone. You are a trend setter, both in photography AND fashion!
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"You were born an original. Don't die a copy."
- John Mason
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on 10/28/17 at 5:58 pm EST
Registered on 11/22/14, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Very nice image. I prefer the lower part a lot more than the upper. The water, boulders, and that single branch hanging over the water is really special. However, I can't come up with a crop that wouldn't require significant cloning at the upper border of the frame.
I really can't come up with good suggestions on the current image. The large rock, top left center, looks a bit awkward peeking through the foliage but that's being picky and it may not be true at all.
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Comment posted by Bill Leggett on 10/28/17 at 8:06 pm EST
Registered on 07/21/04, 706 Posts, 3233 Comments
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Lon, I can only imagine the challenges of focus stacking such a scene, so I'm not likely to attempt it. I like your choice of SS to get the water texture. composition is excellent, and the glow of the warm light on the bedrock against the yellow is superb. A fine capture.
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Bill
Mississippi Gulf Coast |
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"They do not sweat and whine about their condition,
They do not lie awake in the dark and weep for their sins..."
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on 10/29/17 at 12:43 am EST
Registered on 01/04/09, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
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This works for me on many levels Lon. The focus is spot on for the leaves and rocks. The shutter speed you have chosen for the water motion works well.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on 10/29/17 at 12:54 am EST
Registered on 11/24/06, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Thanks for the comments and suggestions! Seems a consensus on rocks up top - not just the one in the ULC, but also the bigger one up top. I think Igor's concern about a messy crop was a valid one, but I think i found one that is decently clean. Here is a cropped version. I also made a few subtle edge adjustments where some of the white water merged with the edge.
I also wanted to mention the blend. Nothing tedious about the blend, it was actually very basic. If you look close, you'll notice the rock and the water below the level of the big rock is more focused/sharp. The water above that line is soft and not in focus. I combined two frames, but it was as simple as one half being the sharper leaves up top, and the sharp rock at the bottom. I'll include a simulated mask to follow.
Thanks for your thoughts and suggestions! I too really like the rocks and water at the bottom of the frame - the aspens leaves, nice color accent... ;-)
Lon
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To photograph is to hold one's breath, when all faculties converge to capture fleeting reality. It's at that precise moment that mastering an image becomes a great physical and intellectual joy. -Henri Cartier-Bresson
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on 10/29/17 at 12:56 am EST
Registered on 11/24/06, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
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Here's a screenshot of the layer mask similar to the one I used on the original master file (I had flattened all that, so I had to repeat from original RAW)
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To photograph is to hold one's breath, when all faculties converge to capture fleeting reality. It's at that precise moment that mastering an image becomes a great physical and intellectual joy. -Henri Cartier-Bresson
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on 10/29/17 at 07:38 am EST
Registered on 11/19/03, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
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The cropped version works, but I prefer the original composition, even with the rocks in it. For me, it is the space between the upper leaves and the edge that does it in the original. For my money, I would clone the upper rock and call it very nicely done. YMMV (money, not mileage).
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"You were born an original. Don't die a copy."
- John Mason
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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on 10/29/17 at 12:44 pm EST
Registered on 02/01/04, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Lon, This is very nice! I have always enjoyed your shot with branches and leaves over the water and I especially like the aspen leaves. I like the comp of the original with a bit more room around the leaves. The one rock doesn't really bother me much but it would be nicer without it. Very nice!
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
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Comment posted by Ed Cordes on 10/29/17 at 8:53 pm EST
Registered on 11/01/03, 451 Posts, 3366 Comments
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This is strikingly wonderful! The blend of images is first rate and the colors really pop. Well done.
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Life is beautiful, but remember - A little mild insanity keeps us healthy!
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Comment posted by Mattia Oliviero on 10/30/17 at 04:45 am EST
Registered on 08/24/16, 43 Posts, 254 Comments
Comment last edited by Mattia Oliviero on 10/30/17 at 04:45 am EST
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I like both versions, Lon. But I do prefer the second which is more direct and more effective. I like the colors and especially the light on the rocks at the bottom, really gorgeous in the large version.
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Mattia Oliviero
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Comment posted by Rudy Ruberti on 10/30/17 at 8:12 pm EST
Registered on 10/28/08, 179 Posts, 1875 Comments
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This is really nice and I like the cropped version that removals part of the diagonal branch in the upper right hand corner. The blend looks good, but I wonder why you needed to blend images, unless to maintain the SS for the water.
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Rudy Ruberti
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