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Photo posted by Igor Doncov in the Landscape gallery on 05/10/17 at 4:04 pm EST
Registered on 11/22/14, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on 05/10/17 at 4:25 pm EST
Registered on 02/01/04, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Igor, This is a very pretty scene with just a wonderful mood and I really like the conditions you captured here. I would probably remove the 3 dots just because it is hard to tell what they are. If I could tell they were ducks flying away then that would be pretty cool too.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
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Comment posted by Don Young on 05/10/17 at 8:28 pm EST
Registered on 04/23/15, 56 Posts, 224 Comments
Igor,
I have to agree with Nick's comment. Beautiful!
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Comment posted by scott lanz on 05/10/17 at 9:59 pm EST
Registered on 11/14/03, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Beautiful, moody image, Igor. In addition to removing the three dots, I would crop a pinch off the left or clone out what look like protruding branch tips. Obviously, very minor stuff.
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scott lanz
Youngstown, Ohio
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Comment posted by Mark Seaver on 05/11/17 at 10:06 am EST
Registered on 01/23/11, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Igor, there's a fine sense of dawn's quietness here. Your use of an iPhone supports my belief that it's not the camera, it's the operator and knowing what the camera can and can't do that make a good picture. Your emphasis on the shapes of the foreground reeds works very well. The "duck dots" should go.
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Mark Seaver
Burtonsville, MD & Emigrant, MT
seaverphotos.com
Weekly Challenge Moderator
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on 05/11/17 at 11:59 am EST
Registered on 11/19/03, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Beautiful! Great serene mood to the image. I would lose the duck. Make a nice 30x40 print! No, wait. iPhone. Never mind..... :)
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"You were born an original. Don't die a copy."
- John Mason
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Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on 05/11/17 at 2:05 pm EST
Registered on 09/17/10, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Yes, Â would remove the ducks, raise more questions by a viewer. The mood is fantastic, Â mysterious and uplifting. Pretty good for camera phone.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on 05/11/17 at 11:18 pm EST
Registered on 11/24/06, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Igor,
Quiet, peaceful and glorious scene. for me the black dots don't look like birds, and optical illusions aside, don't even look like they're on the water surface - AND they should be more obscured by the fog. So to me, I'd get rid of 'em.
Beautiful scene, hard to fault you with the cell phone image as it's a little degraded in the full size. But what the heck.
Lon
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To photograph is to hold one's breath, when all faculties converge to capture fleeting reality. It's at that precise moment that mastering an image becomes a great physical and intellectual joy. -Henri Cartier-Bresson
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Comment posted by Dan Kearl on 05/12/17 at 7:15 pm EST
Registered on 09/02/13, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
I would remove the ducks (too bad they are not closer).
Exceptional mood and the FG is about perfect.
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Comment posted by John Williams on 05/14/17 at 10:55 am EST
Registered on 09/06/07, 221 Posts, 5985 Comments
Agreed Igor. This is really nice; a lovely mood and eye-pleasing. I too would clone the dots (it would have been awesome if they were closer!).
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John Williams www.tranquilviews.com Battle Ground, WA |
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I often have wandered in deep contemplation, It seems that the mind runs wild when you're all alone. -John Denver
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Comment posted by Albert Darmo on 05/14/17 at 3:18 pm EST
Registered on 11/25/08, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Hi Igor The mood and quality of light are wonderfully captured . agree with Mark's comment about I Phone users.
Albert Darmo
Canada
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Comment posted by Anil Rao on 05/14/17 at 11:13 pm EST
Registered on 11/15/03, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments
This is a marvelous scene. The fog adds a strong sense of mystery since it is not apparent what lies on the right side of the frame. I love the silhouetted foreground reeds and how they balance the land in the distance. There is some drama in the sky too and it works well with this composition.
Very nicely done, Igor.
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Anil Rao
Santa Clara, California
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