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A Grand Sunrise +Repost
Photo posted by Eva McDermott in the Landscape gallery on 08/22/16 at 7:33 pm EST
Registered on 01/04/09, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Post last edited by Eva McDermott on 08/23/16 at 10:45 pm EST

Grand Teton National Park taken from Jackson Lake Lodge at sunrise.

Thanks for viewing.  Thanks for your comments and critiques as always.

  
Eva McDermott
Atkinson, NH
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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on 08/22/16 at 8:53 pm EST    
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Eva, A beautiful natural feel to this image. I love the light and conditions you found here on this morning. The combination of mountains and lower trees coming through the fog just looks great. Not sure if it was but the foreground sure looks like it has a light coating of frost and that looks great adding a wonderful touch to this scene. Very nice!

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Comment posted by Bill Chambers on 08/23/16 at 07:10 am EST    
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Gorgeous Eva.  As pretty as the mountains are, I'm so attracted to the FG as well.  I might consider increasing the contrast a bit on the mountains as the shadows look a bit too open.

  
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Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on 08/23/16 at 09:18 am EST    
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Eva, the foreground is really nice.  My suggestions would be to add some midtone contrast to the mountains and have a little less blue sky up top.  Nice mix of cool and warm tones.
 

  
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Comment posted by Bill Chambers on 08/23/16 at 2:49 pm EST    
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To each his own, but I like the amount of sky visible as it adds to the spaciousness of the scene.  Strictly my choice, of course, not a criticism of Doug's choice.

  
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on 08/23/16 at 5:01 pm EST    
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Beautiful scene, Eva. I would favor a little less sky too, but pretty minor. A glorious scene. 
 

  
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on 08/23/16 at 8:54 pm EST    
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Thanks for your input.  Here is a modified version with more contrast.  A cropped version did not work for me. 

  
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Comment posted by Anil Rao on 08/24/16 at 01:13 am EST    
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A very inviting scene, leading all the way to those majestic peaks. The weather conditions really played in you favor here.

I prefer your original presentation over the revised one with more contrast.

Best regards,
Anil

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Comment posted by Ed Lowe on 08/24/16 at 2:46 pm EST    
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My preference is for the original, Eva. The increase in contrast in the repost seems to have made the cyan a little to strong. The trees peeking out of the low lying fog are some wonderful elements in the scene as is the light on the peaks. What do you think of making this more of a pano with an even greater crop down to just above the clouds?

Ed

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Comment posted by scott lanz on 08/24/16 at 7:31 pm EST    
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Put me down for the original as well, Eva. The atmospheric conditions make this Tetons image unique and beautiful.

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Comment posted by gary phillips on 08/24/16 at 8:05 pm EST    
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I'm in for the original also, Eva.   Love the mist rising from the meadow and the subtle color shifts to the Tetons.    I also really like the space up top.  The low hanging clouds are money.  Beautiful image.

  
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Comment posted by Jeffrey Sipress on 08/24/16 at 11:40 pm EST    
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The original works fine for me, Eva.  What a wonderful start to your day.

  
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Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on 08/26/16 at 11:50 am EST    
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Gorgeous scene. Not sure about added contrast - I believe I like the original version best.
Sandy

  
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Comment posted by Vance Gese on 08/28/16 at 01:06 am EST    
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Love the glow on the mountains, Eva, and that wonderful ground fog.  Do prefer the repost with the increased contrast of the mountains.

  
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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on 08/28/16 at 01:16 am EST    
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I agree with the others that the original works better . I also see the logic of increasing contrast in the mountains.  Maybe using an adjustment brush on the original to just increase contrast on the mountains?  
ML

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