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Photo posted by Eva McDermott in the Landscape gallery on 11/18/15 at 9:04 pm EST
Registered on 01/04/09, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments

An in camera abstract (not motion blur; using Ian Cameron's technique) taken in my backyard in NH. 

Canon 5DM2
Canon 24-70mm f/2.8L at 51mm
ISO100 1/40sec f/11

Thanks for having a look and for any comment and critiques.

  
Eva McDermott
Atkinson, NH
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Comment posted by Mark Seaver on 11/18/15 at 10:21 pm EST    
Registered on 01/23/11, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments

This is a very colorful and interesting mix of blur and sharp, Eva.  Sure has me wondering about the "how to", since you say it's not motion blur.

  
Mark Seaver
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on 11/18/15 at 10:26 pm EST    
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Hi Mark.  I used Ian's technique of Vasaline on an old filter.  Depending on how you smooth out the film, you can get different areas of blur and sharpeness.  In this case the Vasaline was smeared on the filter in the horizontal direction. 

  
Eva McDermott
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on 11/19/15 at 01:08 am EST    
Registered on 11/22/14, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments

Wow, this is really cool Eva. I like how the foliage is sharp but the upper area is blurred in a vertical direction. Very unusual. We (NPN) seem to be doing a lot of abstracts suddenly. I wonder why. I can see a fine composition where the sky is ommited, but that's not what you were after. Very nice creative image.

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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on 11/19/15 at 01:23 am EST    
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Thanks Igor.  I can see were a square comp with out the sky may be stronger.  Some idea to play around with.

  
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Comment posted by Ian Cameron on 11/19/15 at 03:11 am EST    
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Very colourful and a beautiful vaseline smear Eva. 

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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on 11/19/15 at 09:47 am EST    
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Going back to the old school tricks!  This turned out very well, Eva. Did you also shoot it without the Vaseline? It would be interesting to compare the two if you did.

  
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Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on 11/19/15 at 11:29 am EST    
Registered on 11/01/03, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments

Nicely done, Eva. The effect is very interesting. The composition lends itself to this trick. You migh consider pulling the cyan down a tad. I love the Autmn colors.

--P

  
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Columbia, California, USA

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Comment posted by Albert Darmo on 11/19/15 at 11:42 am EST    
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Hi  Evacrying  I love seeing  creative  abstracts  posted  at landscape.  the vasaline  smear  made the colors and detail  are just  right  to  hold  my attention.


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Comment posted by Roel Wijtmans on 11/19/15 at 12:26 pm EST    
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My first thought was the same as Igor's, crop out the sky. I think that would add a bit more atmosphere to it. Great colors and comp, sure looks like a nice backyard. I must try that vaseline trick some day, looks very cool.

  

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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on 11/19/15 at 3:12 pm EST    
Registered on 11/24/06, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments

Hi Eva,

I'm still intrigued by how the technique produces the results.  I guess I just don't get how a "horizontal smear" could produce the perception of vertical motion.  But it doesn't matter really, at all - it's the result that matters and this is a success!

Like other comments, I may experiment with either cropping the blue up top or doing something with the color - either desat or something with the cyan.  I really like the warmth of the image without the top 1/4 or so, but of course that's all just personal choice and what you like.

Lon

  

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Livermore, California

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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on 11/19/15 at 4:36 pm EST    
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Hi Eva, This is really cool looking. I like what that vasaline effect did with this scene. The light and colors just add that much more to this as well. It does look good without the blue sky too. Nice backyard!!

Nick Bristol
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Comment posted by Richard Wong on 11/19/15 at 4:51 pm EST    
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Really cool effect Eva. I like how the middle stays sharp but everything else has the dreamy motion look.

  

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Comment posted by Richard Teller on 11/19/15 at 6:35 pm EST    
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Interesting abstract with really great colors and light.

  
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Comment posted by Kathy Barnhart on 11/20/15 at 11:49 am EST    
Registered on 11/11/11, 404 Posts, 1639 Comments

Love the motion and the colors, lines, and shapes. The overall darkened mood is perfect for fall. I like the blue at the top, but I might think about cropping just a tad as it is the lightest part of the photo and the eye goes there. Still, a lovely image.

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Comment posted by Mark Metternich on 11/23/15 at 8:50 pm EST    
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SO COOL!  Congrats! 

  
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