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Photo posted by Roel Wijtmans in the Landscape gallery on 04/28/15 at 2:00 pm EST
Registered on 09/30/12, 116 Posts, 2257 Comments
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on 04/28/15 at 2:16 pm EST
Registered on 11/19/03, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
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The zigging lines are working for me, along with the wide range of greens in the image. Very minor, but I might burn down the tree trunk at the very back right?
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"You were born an original. Don't die a copy."
- John Mason
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Comment posted by Vance Gese on 04/28/15 at 4:52 pm EST
Registered on 11/13/08, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
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Really like the zig zag pattern of the moss covered logs which walk the eye back into your composition so very well. Wonderful detail throughout. The white areas on the water in the back (ice???) are a bit of an eye catcher; wonder if a little burning or use of Tony Kuyper's triple play would be useful to bring down the brightness and maybe provide some details in the ice, and even in some of the brighter leaves. A very minor suggestion though as this is a very nice intimate landscape.
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Vance Gese
Vance Gese Photography
Quilcene, Washington |
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I was merely there, a small, puny, awestruck man,
praising Almighty God, with camera in hand.
Make a few images, well.
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on 04/28/15 at 6:31 pm EST
Registered on 01/04/09, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
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I too really like the diagonals and vibrant greens of the rain forest. The yellow leaves add interest to the scene. I agree with Vance on burning down the bright spot on the water.
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Comment posted by D.A. Edwards on 04/28/15 at 6:33 pm EST
Registered on 10/08/14, 226 Posts, 1187 Comments
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Wonderful comp Roel of a green, natural zig-zag. That foreground log's mantle is particularly interesting and would be a great place to investigate macro comps. I like that I can see to the bottom of the water in the FG and the perfectly spaced sprinkling of yellow leaves throughout the image which helps tie everything together.
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D.A. (Dave) Edwards
Sacramento, The Golden State, USA |
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Comment posted by gary phillips on 04/28/15 at 7:50 pm EST
Registered on 10/24/13, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
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I think this is really well seen, Roel. I love the detail in the mosses and logs. I agree with Vance about the ice/snow, but a very worthy composition.
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Comment posted by Alberto Patiño on 04/28/15 at 8:51 pm EST
Registered on 12/02/14, 278 Posts, 1736 Comments
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I really like the composition, and also the many shades of green - wonderfully seen!
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Alberto Patiño Douce
Athens, GA, USA
Four Billion Years Website
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We have faith that future generations will know that here, in the middle of the twentieth century, there came a time when men of good will found a way to unite and fight to destroy the forces of ignorance and intolerance.
Franklin Delano Roosevelt, February 12, 1943
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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on 05/01/15 at 12:14 pm EST
Registered on 11/01/03, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
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Great comp. It just walks my eye right through the scene in the most pleasant fashion.
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