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Photo posted by Stuart Williams in the Landscape gallery on 02/05/12 at 09:15 am EST
Registered on 12/07/07, 247 Posts, 4792 Comments

among the travels and travails over the past seven months, i spent a little over three weeks in canada visiting the in-laws (and various other out-laws). a few days escape took us canoe camping to parc de la maurice to find some peace and space. but rather than be filled with music, aside from the haunting calls of the loon, it was eerily silent. the light was the music, still and beautiful.

thanks for the comments on my last post - most helpful and appreciated - and thanks for taking a look at this. again, your comments and thoughts are appreciated.

hasselblad 500c/m, 150mm, delta 100 b&w film.
parc de la maurice, quebec, canada.

  
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Comment posted by Anthony Vincent on 02/05/12 at 12:30 pm EST    
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One of those images that strikes a 'chord' with me. Simple and effective. I too love the haunting call of loons, one of my favorite birds.
Great image Stuart

  
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Comment posted by scott lanz on 02/05/12 at 12:35 pm EST    
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Very nice image. Excellent mood and artistry to this. I do find the upper half is a little washed out, and I prefer this as a horizontal cropped just above the darker reeds. Just my subjective opinion, of course.

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Comment posted by Stuart Williams on 02/05/12 at 12:50 pm EST    
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you're right - scott - it could work with a crop as well. let's see if anybody else mentions this. thanks for the comment - appreciated. thanks too anthony.

  
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Comment posted by Ant on 02/05/12 at 2:04 pm EST    
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Spendid, minimal and extremely attracting. Where really less is more... I like it a lot. It reminds me of some
old elemental landscapes of Harry Callahan (the photographer, not the detective...).

  
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Comment posted by Morris McClung on 02/05/12 at 3:14 pm EST    
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And a beautiful score it is.
There is an element of mystery with the mist in the top half, but it does work as a crop to. Well, now you have two shots for the price of one.

  
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Comment posted by Greg Lessard on 02/05/12 at 4:04 pm EST    
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Interesting composition and title. I like the repeated patterns of the grasses, although I would be tempted to crop the upper portion just above the foreground grasses. What inspired the title?

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Comment posted by Richard Teller on 02/05/12 at 4:06 pm EST    
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I really like the simple comp. of this image. The crop is fine as is, but I also think there are other crops that could even focus the attention on the prominent stems at the front of the image.

  
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Comment posted by Danny Laureys on 02/05/12 at 4:43 pm EST    
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Love this, I would either crop this also or clone out the lighter reeds,which would give you more empty space above, which I like.But I think I would go for the crop on this one

  
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Comment posted by Vance Gese on 02/05/12 at 5:08 pm EST    
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Absolutely love the design of your image, Stuart. The strong graphic appeal of these grasses set against that wonderful light gray makes these grasses appear to be suspended in mid air. I also love the contrast between the foreground grasses and those in the background; the further grasses almost act like a soft echo of those in front and to me further your title / intent. While I can appreciate the suggestions on a crop, I wouldn't touch this, in all honesty. This is superb as presented, a stunning b/w image.

  
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on 02/05/12 at 5:17 pm EST    
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Beautiful and minimalistic Stuart. I really like it just the way it is since a crop would make this loose its very ethereal character.

  
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Comment posted by Jean Day on 02/05/12 at 9:18 pm EST    
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I also see two lovely comps here, each one strong enough to stand on its own.

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Comment posted by Stuart Williams on 02/05/12 at 11:29 pm EST    
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thanks to all for comments - all very much appreciated. like you all, i presume, i walk out of the door with a camera in hand and then try to live within the frame that it presents. each camera has it's own frame - that which one can see within the viewfinder and maybe translated one day into a print. i use the hassy quite a lot at present - i enjoy the fact that i can carry two or three magazines, each loaded with a different film; i enjoy the glass afforded by the zeiss lenses - so i live within the 6x6 frame that comes with it. (and i believe i would enjoy working with a 5x4 - for the added control that one would have over the exposure - development process to produce fine negatives.) i rarely - very rarely - look at a scene and think, okay, i will crop this down. hence my preconception was largely borne out here. the crop has merits no doubt, but i'm living comfortably with this as it is.

as for the title, greg, it seemed to me that the grasses were as musical notes; maybe a touch unfinished, as with schubert ...

thanks again to all. happy to hear what anyone else has to say!

  
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Comment posted by Dan Baumbach on 02/06/12 at 08:22 am EST    
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This is very nice. It reminds me a bit of Michael Kenna.

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Comment posted by Paul Marcellini on 02/06/12 at 12:25 pm EST    
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I love it, lots of comps available but this one works as well as any.

  
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Comment posted by Bill Chambers on 02/06/12 at 3:26 pm EST    
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Very Pretty Stuart. I like the minimal approach you've taken. I like the composition and format you've chosen, but agree a horizontal format would work as well. Nicely seen.

  
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on 02/06/12 at 6:21 pm EST    
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Beautiful. Works as presented and works cropped down. Real sweet and simple!

  
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Comment posted by Stan Rose on 02/06/12 at 7:35 pm EST    
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Maybe im just having deja vu, but im pretty sure ive seen this before, or something similar from you. Anyhow, looks perfect to me, i wouldnt crop at all, the top guys really add a lot here.

  
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Comment posted by Zack Clothier on 02/07/12 at 10:58 am EST    
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Wonderfully simple and effective, nice work Stuart.

  
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Comment posted by Stuart Williams on 02/07/12 at 12:47 pm EST    
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just deja vu, stan - or something. i have, i confess, posted some reeds before but not quite like this. the moment caught my eye and i couldn't resist!

  
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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on 02/07/12 at 2:24 pm EST    
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Loons...my favorite sound in nature! This is a wonderful image Stuart! I really love the feel of this, and perfect just as it is for me. Excellent work!

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