Mohawk Falls +repost+repost
by Ed Lowe
Nikon D700
Nikon 17-35 @ 19mm
f 18 @ 2 sec.
ISO 200
cable release & tripod
CPL filter
Ricketts Glen SP, PA
My intention was to cross over and shoot the falls from the other side and include some autumn foliage in the scene, but one half way across I gave it up because it was quite slippery. I was by myself and did not want to risk it. Anyway, this is what I came up with.
As always thanks for your thoughts.
Ed
Comments
18 comments--P
pat
I like the comp and the SS for the water and the use of the naturally fallen autumn leaves. I could see a bit of a crop off the top to reduce the largest white sky spot. I agree with the perception that it is tilted CW. Nice work!
Ed
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John
I like the background (in the "corrected" version without tilt), I think you choose the right shutter speed to catch the water flow, I also like color treatment and the detail level.
Yet,there's something that doesn't win me over about the foreground: you decided to put in both the streams, that are directed toward the corners of the image and somehow they are "cut". In this way I think that the image looses something.
Perhaps, if you decided to include in the photo only one of them (the left one seems to be more interesting), the composition would have been stronger and more "incolving".
Obviously this is only my personal opinion.
Thanks again for your thoughts.
Ed
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Another vote for the first repost.
pat