In little over three weeks I'm off to Namibia again, so I thought I'd better hurry posting some of the shots from last time.
This is a dead camelthorn tree that I shot in Deadvlei, Namibia, just before sunset. I converted it to BW afterwards in PS.
Your comments are appreciated.
D2Xs, AF-S 12-24/4.0, 1/30 @ f/16, ISO 100, tripod, NDG
Comments
54 commentsGreat shot.
Excellent simplicity and contrast.
I wish I could afford to take your Namibia workshop, maybe some day
Rune Hansen
This is a masterpiece.
Lon
Really well done.
Guy
Best,
Jose
Lori
@ Peter: I agree it doesn't look like an acacia tree, that's why I never said it was one.
Now that is one of the coolest, most original images I've seen of this amazing place! Fantastic job and congratulations on the EP!
Graphically, I see a lot of strength here. There a two things that bother me:
1. The sky vignettes quite strongly. It darkens in the upper corners to the extent that I begin to lose track of the primary tree shape, which is the center of interest. This may be an insurmountable consequence of how this was shot.
2. The of thing that bothers me is that the second-largest tree shape in the frame intersects violently with the distant dune-sky line. You have a frame full of strong graphics here, but I do see that distant tree group as important.
You would have to move the camera up to get the group of tree skeletons below the dune-sky line. That would change the composition of the other elements to some extent, and may have made it impossible to block the sun with the foreground tree. It would be great to have been there, to take this photograph, and to try other compositons.
Pete D.