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by gary phillips

Gallery: LandscapePosted August 6, 20185,338 views12 comments
I'm going to post a series of images from one rare calm evening early this year.  My son Dan, and dog Lucy, usually take an evening jeep drive when it looks promising.  Generally the camera never makes it out of the bag, but every once in awhile, we're glad we're there.  This is one of those evenings.

17-40mm @ 17mm, f/11, .8s iso 100

Better large

Your comments and critiques are very helpful and always appreciated.

Comments

12 comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on August 6, 2018 at 10:35 AM
The symmetry works beautifully here as does the tonal range, Gary. Great reflection and I find those FG rocks particularly striking as they finish off the scene for me. Wonderful job on this.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on August 6, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Beautiful reflection, sky and scene. I might try to lift the whites a little in the upper sky to bump the contrast, but really minor. An excellent takeaway from the evening drive with Dan and the pooch. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Lowe on August 6, 2018 at 3:26 PM
I'm really enjoying this one. I like how the clouds and their reflection all seem to radiate outward in a v pattern. Nice without the rocks so they're like icing on the cake.
Registered on February 11, 2004, 777 Posts, 5252 Comments
Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on August 7, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Great capture, Gary.  I’m eager to see the series.  I like this a lot.  I can see the benefits of bumping whites a bit as mentioned above, but that might make the sky compete too much with the fg rocks?  I can also imagine this with less sky (a 1/3 sky 2/3 water and land com) to emphasize the rocks more.  Of course, it’s lovely as is as well, so it depends on your vision for it: calm or dynamic, sky as icing v. rocks as icing in the cake, etc. 

Nice work and looking forward to the others.
ML
Registered on December 14, 2010, 122 Posts, 1034 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on August 8, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Hello Gary.  I like the symmetry of the image and the foreground rocks under the water.  One possible suggestion to try may be to add just a little contrast, midtone contrast or tonal contrast, but not too much to remove the feeling of calmness you caught.
Registered on April 1, 2010, 196 Posts, 1592 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on August 8, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Gary, this is wonderful b&w work. I'm really enjoying it and it works nice for me as is. Cheers, Nick
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on August 8, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Sweet one, Gary. You've had some excellent B&W conversions and this one is high on the list with regard to a very pleasant scene with calming affects. Glad your camera made it out of the bag for this one......enlightened
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on August 8, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Well thats pretty damn fun. Gotta love stil water!
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on August 9, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Gary, the clean symmetry here is outstanding, with the under water stones at the bottom making this a special view.  The brightness of the central peak and the wall behind and to the right create a very strong sense of a vast, dramatic landscape.  This one's definitely a wall hanger.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on August 9, 2018 at 12:58 PM
You not only got calm water, but you had a nice sky to go along with it.  I like the foreground rocks to add depth and also abstract character of land on the far shore.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on August 10, 2018 at 2:19 PM
What makes this image for me is the contrast between the sharp and contrasty distant land and the murky, subdued sky and water. I like the composition as is although I can understand the argument of cropping some of the sky to bring out the rocks a bit more. The image feels a bit tight on the bottom in that I wish a bit more space beneath the rocks. I do like how they slowly submerge into oblivion, however. Too bad about that AZ move. The photo ops just won't be as good. But who knows, perhaps you'll be surprised. This is a marvelous image, really.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Anil Rao on August 16, 2018 at 6:20 PM
There is a zen like feel about this image. Viewing it almost puts me into a trance. I suppose this is result of the movement in the clouds coupled with the soft rendition of the submerged rocks in the foreground. I love the overall darkish tones with the highlights in the snow covered mountains acting a punctuation mark. 

A sophisticated presentation ... one that I have enjoyed viewing very much.
Registered on November 15, 2003, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments