Gallery: LandscapePosted March 6, 20182,541 views6 comments
Here is another of the beach rocks..weathered over a period of time....
7D, Zeiss 50, F11, ISO 200 1/40
Balan Vinod
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6 comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on March 6, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Nice textures and detail. I think it's a little dark, so you might look at bringing it up some. I would also like to see just bit of detail in the larger holes. Also, you could brighten the yellows just a bit. This would be fun to experiment with different crops, but this works well as presented.
--P
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on March 6, 2018 at 1:13 PM
I like the texture and colors but the composition is too busy for me. I don't know where to look.
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Comment posted by Jim Zablotny on March 6, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Hi Balan,
A very busy scene which falls into a form of abstraction. Work on pulling details out of the shadows and develop those yellows as Preston suggested.....................Jim
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Comment posted by Ed McGuirk on March 7, 2018 at 9:30 AM
I also agree with Preston's comments. This is a nice abstract subject that has a lot of potential for creating nice patterns with different crops. As presented, I'm a little bothered by the brightest tonality being in the upper left corner, it keeps pulling my eye away from the rest of the pattern. I'd consider either burning that area down. Alternatively you may also want to consider cropping some from the bottom and the right side because the left half of this image holds more interest for me than the right half does.
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Comment posted by Mark Seaver on March 7, 2018 at 11:26 AM
That's a fascinating weathering pattern, Balan. I wonder how this would look in b&w?
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Comment posted by David Schoen on March 7, 2018 at 5:22 PM
A really good abstract study of texture and form. I do agree with Preston that it could be lightened up a bit. It would also make a good black-and-white.
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6 comments--P
A very busy scene which falls into a form of abstraction. Work on pulling details out of the shadows and develop those yellows as Preston suggested.....................Jim