Côte Sauvage
by Peter Richter
The image was taken at Côte Sauvage, the western coast of Quiberon peninsula, Brittany, in September 2017
At the end of a rather stormy and wet day, finally some comforting rays of sunshine came along with the incoming tide. We stayed there until dusk, watching the never-ending motion of the sea.
Comments and critique are welcome.
Comments
5 commentsThat looks like a beautiful spot at a beautiful time of day. As to critique, the biggest problem I'm having with this image is its lack of depth - it feels flat. For example, that large section of rock that fills the centre-right of the image: looking carefully, I can see that there is a leading, smaller section that somehow bridges over to connect with the main section. But it mostly appears as one flat mass. I think what is lacking is contrast and specifically mid-tone contrast. Indeed, increasing the contrast in the highlights would risk blowing them out. So, you'd want to protect the highlights, perhaps boost the shadows a touch, but as I say, it feels to me like it is about increasing the contrast in the mid-tones, both in the rock and the water. I might also want to reduce some of the red/magenta cast, particularly in the rock. I hope this is helpful.
--P
I really like the warmth here, although it does come across as a bit monochromatic - which isn't a problem really, just an observation of the light.
Initially I was torn about the inclusion of the sea wall up top, but the good news is that you included enough of it to let the viewer know you intended to include it; and it also serves to frame the composition nicely.
I like the shutter speed with the water. Lot's of options with that, but the texture and motion work well with this capture.
No nits or suggestions.
Lon