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Great Falls in Winter #1
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Great Falls in Winter #1

by Mark Seaver

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 20, 201820,998 views14 comments
Our relatively cold temperatures have created some nice ice on the rocks in the Potomac.  Yesterday, I was able to combine some ice with high enough flow level to get enough mist for rainbows to show up.  While I enjoy the combination, finding compositions that I like from the limited area of the viewing platform is an ongoing challenge.  (5D3, 100-400mm IS II @ 300 mm, 1/5 s, f/16, iso 200, tripod, polarizer, ND filter and cable release)

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Stephen Stanton on January 20, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Really nice image, Mark, the rock in the sweet spot strongly anchors the view into the water and falls.
Registered on March 1, 2015, 54 Posts, 453 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on January 20, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Excellent capture of the action and misty colors, Mark. Exposure looks right on for the bright conditions, and I like the ss. 
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Ed McGuirk on January 20, 2018 at 5:19 PM
I guess the government isn't the only thing frozen on the Potomac this winter. Mark this is a very dynamic composition, I like how you composed it to have the flow reverse just above the big triangular rock, it really pulls your eye back and forth across this image. The two little cascades to the right of the rock are a nice accent to this image as well. Given how strong the water flow is, you did well to get the texture and definition in the water, nice job on the shutter speed. Nice work....
Registered on November 29, 2017, 19 Posts, 260 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on January 20, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Mark, I am really enjoying the bottom 70% or so of the image, very dynamic and engaging, but I find the top area kind of detracts from the rest. I think cloning the log would help some for me, but I might even play with a crop.  I seem to be on my own with that, and as usual, YMMV. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Leggett on January 20, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Very well done, Mark. Great Falls is on on my bucket list. Good choice of shutter speed to get some detail in the water. On the thumbnail it looked like a rainbow, but I see it's the color of the water.
Registered on July 21, 2004, 706 Posts, 3233 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Kearl on January 20, 2018 at 9:30 PM
I would crop off the top also. Crop to just above the falls.
Sweet color and SS.
Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on January 21, 2018 at 11:21 AM
I like this a lot. The shutter speed was perfect for this and shows the different colors in the water. I do agree with the crop suggestion. However, the framing woks as it is, but you might consider cloning out the log. I like the little cascade on the right.
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on January 21, 2018 at 11:29 AM
A very nice image of the falls. I agree with Preston's suggestion: keep composition as is and clone out the log. Although, the shadow of the log without a log may be an issue to some.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on January 21, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Mark, lots of suggestions for changes, but that shows the ability also to find changes in a good image too. For me I would go with a lower bottom area pano sort of take. To me it is the most dynamic part of the scene. Crop down maybe to just above that smaller rock in the center area. The crop /clone/ CA of the branch and the shadow removal are what makes all the PS abilities shine of course.That rainbow in the lower cascade makes me even more positive on the thought for a pano of sorts in that area. 
With the larger FG rocks it might appear a bit heavy toward that side, but I think those are prominent items in the scene as presented now anyway.  
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on January 21, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Yes, that log creates composition problems.  I agree with Igor, that the log cannot be cloned without also cloning it's shadow.  Leaving the shadow will have many viewers recognizing the cloning, which leads to them questioning what else in this view is a modification of what was actually there.  I believe that as a nature photographer it's important to show nature as it is, not as I wish it were (although I will clone some things readily).  The alternative with a major item, like this, is to burn or dodge to reduce it's visual impact.  Here's a version where that log has been burned-in significantly.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on January 21, 2018 at 2:04 PM
This is excellent, Mark. Nicely balanced composition and beautiful mist-bow but I find that protruding log a distraction. I think I would experiment with cloning it out.
Registered on December 10, 2015, 104 Posts, 1112 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 21, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Mark,

The star attraction is of course the rainbow colors captured.  The environment that is producing the rainbow is dynamic and full of raw power.  The big rock and overflow cascades are great addition to the overall river scene.

I would agree with others about cropping some from the top to emphasize these features.  I didn't notice this until a second look at the larger view, but if you can you might want to content-aware clone out the forked branch in the ULC; it's mildly detracting.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Williams on January 22, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Mark I love the bits of ice and the amazing smooth roaring water in this one. The rainbow puts it over the top for me. I like the repost colors a bit better with the log toned down a bit. Beautiful.
 
Registered on December 28, 2010, 636 Posts, 3499 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 22, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Mark,

I appreciate and respect the idea that we should be photographing and presenting what was there, what we saw.  I think this is a great topic one could open in a discussion forum so I won't take this any further.... other than to say, once you enter and start calling your work "fine art" and if you were to print this as a fine art wall hanger, personally I wouldn't want the log there.

Disregarding anything I just said, I did want to point out something that is missing regarding the log and its shadow.  Who's to say or know if a projected shadow in the frame didn't originate from an object outside the frame??  It's perfectly logical that the log could have been outside the frame and still cast a shadow, right?  I know I'm really nitpicky with a lot of my comments, cropping here, cloning there, etc. etc., but to be perfectly honest, on first pass, I never really noticed the log.  Upon multiple passes I never once paid attention to the shadow, until it was mentioned.

Just my not so humble opinion, I think not cloning it for ethical reasons (ie. it was there, so it belongs) is a stronger argument than whether or not the shadow should be considered - or even noticed...  Again, it's very plausible that the shadow was cast from outside the frame; the main issue is that YOU know it wasn't... angel enlightened

Just a thought.
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments