Claypit Pond
by Alberto Patiño
The same wetlands shown in my previous post. This used to be a pit from which clay was mined to make bricks, sometime in the early twentieth century. It is now managed by the county as a nature preserve.
Leica Summicron 90mm, Sony A7R, minimal adjustments in Capture One v.11. Better large.
Comments
5 commentsI think I prefer your previous post - even though I carved it up pretty good with crop suggestions. I think this one is just as chaotic, but also more random. Nice reflections overall and on each side. I like what's going on in the left half, but find the branches coming in from the right a little disconnected from the rest of the scene.
The large view makes a big difference and the details really shine here - which wasn't the case for me in your previous post. but again, I would consider a crop. I really like the left half and think a square crop could be quite good.
Next to rain forest images, these type scenes perhaps are one of the most difficult to pull good comps from.
Lon
I can see how this may be interpreted as too chaotic. I think that's subjective. This is not a very ordered composition but there is clear order here. There is horizontal separation. There are repetitive vertical trees, particularly in the reflections. The leaves on right form a shape. It's just that shapes and patterns overlay one another. Works for me, but as Harley says 'your mileage may vary'.
Lon, I agree, they are very difficult to pull successfully. The branch on the right is a big issue with me too. There was just no way of framing the image without the branches while not falling into the muddy pond. If I crop the branches I also crop the reflection, which I like. And if I try to clone it I don't like the artificial result. My thought processes laid bare