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Where there's smoke....

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted November 27, 20178,750 views14 comments
Thanks Harley and Igor for your comments on my last post.  How often does it happen when a member can post back to back images in Landscape with no one else making a post?  Yikes.

Well, this one here is just slightly more dramatic that the previous post and hope it gets a better response.  cool This was in the early afternoon after Kyle and I had met up with Harley and had established our campsites - well me anyway, I'm the only one tenting it.  So the three of us headed out with Maggie (Harley's girl...) to hit the loop and look for opportunities.  Harley was the first to spot the smoke and motioned for me to pull over.  Harley posted a great image of beams through the pines and smoke of the nearby controlled burn.  I took a broader view of the river scene and captured this.  Of course it was captured in color and honestly it looked too much like smoke, the rays not good in the color version.  I thought the b&w presentation worked better.

Would love your thoughts, comments and suggestions.  Single frame, b&w a result of Nik's Silver Efex Pro 2

Thanks!

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on November 27, 2017 at 7:44 PM
The b&w choice was a good one. It looks as though it's early morning and the rays are burning through the mist. There's no hint that this is smoke except for the title. The rays in the large version look wonderful. 

BTW, did you have to straighten out the trees using photoshop's perspective tools. The reason I ask is because I shot some a while ago at 24mm and the trees on either side are bent toward the center. It's not a bad effect but I want to straighten them out. 
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Kearl on November 27, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Well it works very well in B & W. I thought you caught some nice rays through the fog from the thumbnail.
I would not have really known it was smoke unless mentioned. I think if you tweaked the clarity a bit, you could smooth it out
a bit more for a even more "fog" like look if you chose to.
Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on November 27, 2017 at 9:31 PM
This turned out really nice, I like it a lot. Good choice on the B&W. No suggestions here. 

 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Anil Rao on November 28, 2017 at 5:49 AM
A beautiful landscape image. Inspiring and totally captivating. 

I wouldn't have have guessed it was smoke. Looks so much like fog.
Registered on November 15, 2003, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on November 28, 2017 at 7:54 AM
My first response was' "I want to be there." The b&w makes this look like some early morning fog still hanging over a calm and quit forest. A very peaceful image. The b&w works really well with this image. It almost gives it a mysterious feeling. 
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on November 28, 2017 at 11:49 AM
Love the crepuscular rays here, Lon.  Even if it is smoke, this has a fine early/late light feeling where going b&w lets the lighting dominate the view.

As an aside, I believe that the lack of comments is the fastest way to drive down membership and participation.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Craig Moreau on November 28, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Lon, excellent use of the smoke and sun rays to great effect. I like all the varied thickness of smoke, obscuring and revealing things at different levels. I like the dark and light halves of the image as well. Great choice to go with B&W.
Registered on April 21, 2015, 64 Posts, 584 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on November 28, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Great atmospherics, does look like mist.  Other than  a slight crop of the left (the tree far left), looks great as is.  A slight crop might focus the interest  a bit more to the right.  Not sure if possible, but  more water / reflection would be wonderful too but I suspect you would have done it if it was present.  Has a feel of the great painters that portrayed the Yosemite area.  I am assuming this is Yosemite.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on November 29, 2017 at 1:54 AM
What really works for me in this presentation is the dark stillness of the water leading to the rays in the smoke (fog).  Perfect b/w material.  This has a wonderful quiet beauty that is not easy to find and even harder to capture.  Very nice, Lon, I love it.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on November 29, 2017 at 10:49 AM
Lon, This made such a wonderful b&w image. I love looking at the large version...wonderful work!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on November 29, 2017 at 11:02 AM
The rays in the smoke show nicely.  The bright spot in the UL might be eliminated.  This works well in B&W to me.
Registered on April 1, 2010, 196 Posts, 1592 Comments
Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on November 29, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Well that looks pretty damn good to me.  Very cool

aF

And yes, the forum has definitely slowed down over the last few years.  Alas :/
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Dave Harwood on November 30, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Lon, This is gorgeous, a rare moment of light made visible. Beautiful composition as well in ways immediately apparent. You chose a soft focus effect. Part of me wonders what the same scene and moment would look like were the landscape to be Ansel Adams sharp? The question occurs because this capture is that good! Dave
Registered on February 4, 2015, 29 Posts, 29 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on December 14, 2017 at 9:02 AM
Have to say this still is a really terrific bnw image Lon.
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments