
Thanks so much for your comments and suggestions on my previous post!
Shortly after the last image was taken, Kyle and I headed down from Tunnel View to one of my favorite spots in the Valley. And despite the 4 MILLION+ people that visit this valley every year, there are places in the valley where it's quite easy to feel like you're the only soul on the planet viewing such grandeur. My guess is the 99% of the people that visit the park don't stop and spend time here as they are off to more famous locations; which is fine by me.
Mornings after a storm are glorious in the valley. The fog was still rolling, mist rising, creating boundless opportunities. We spent a good 2 hours here exploring up and down the river with an eye on El Capitan most of the time. I'm usually looking for the intimate and different views, but was not going to pass up what was happening before me.
This is a 2-image stich. I only had the 28-300mm on the camera and knew I wanted a wider view than what I could get, so I combined 2 verticals.
I would love to hear your comments, critiques and suggestions.
Thank you!
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16 commentsI forgot to mention, I really enjoy the reflection of the rock face too.
I agree the reflection is a bit dark, especially the LL quadrant. I've tweaked that up in my master file.
Regarding the two halves or two worlds, I see that as well. I'm kicking myself too now because I normally size my verticals/sq to max 1000px on the vertical. This time I went 1100px, almost insuring vertical scrolling. This happens to me whenever I view any image where I have to scroll vertically to piece it all together - I think by default we end up seeing in sections or crops simply because the image is broken in parts. When I see an image pop up whole without any scrolling, I think that certainly provides a more natural impression than seeing it in parts by scrolling. At least that's what I think. It's still perfectly valid to consider a crop depending on what you like best about an image.
Yes, the top of El Cap was enshrouded in clouds - plus the fact at 28mm there was no way to include everything (Yes, I could stitch in rows, but I'm not that sophisticated - I'm still trying to get focus stacking down...)
I too really like the face of El Cap, and it's reflection. Truthfully, the colors on the rock face are boosted slightly - I still try and maintain believability, but continue pushing the edge.
Bill - yeah, I wish there were more color in the trees as well. It was a down year for the black oak as most of them just went brown - no intermediate colors. We were too late for most of the Big Leaf Maple and other deciduous, still, pretty hard to complain about color in a place like this.
I'm pretty sure this is level, although I can't be certain. I think what you might be seeing Igor is the horizon line of the grass/tree line. To the right, it looks pretty level. To the left of center, there's definitely a slant. I'm gonna go with the notion that the meadow grasses and treeline to the left are receding, also advancing towards the river bank, creating a narrow triangle that makes it looks like it's sloped? Well, that's my story and I'm sticking to it. A keen observation for sure.
Good stuff, thanks for your comments!
I think the square crop works although for some reason (maybe the curved shore), it seems a bit constricted.
The muted colors are nice....
This next isn't really a critique, just something I noticed and now can't un-see. Overall, the image has a slightly distorted fisheye appearance to me. As I look at it more, I do think it's an optical illusion, because the grass/tree line is straight, but the river edge below it is wider in the middle, and then the treetops create an arch shape above and mirrored arch below. As nobody else has mentioned this, it's probably just in my head.
YES, I saw that too and glad in a way that someone else sees it too. It's a combo of things I think. Certainly the shoreline that juts out a little in the middle. Then combined with the curved tops of the oaks - and their reflect accentuates that feeling. I do get that fish-eye sense, but not the distorted one that you might see from a fish-eye view of a stadium or something.
Thanks for the comment and keen observation.
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After looking at the image a second time I am wondering what the scene would look like horizontal. I don't know the location so I don't know if it is possible but that is what my mind is telling me. Otherwise, nice clear, sharp reflection.