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Prepping for Fall +RP
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Prepping for Fall +RP

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted October 7, 20179,817 views12 comments
Thanks again for your comments and suggestions on my previous image.  

Alas, my Sonora Pass stockpile is dwindling.  Good thing fall is here and I'm ready to head out and captures some new images. Heading out next Friday for a few days to catch a few days of fall in the Eastern Sierra.

Last time I was out there for fall color was 2015, which is when this image was taken.  It was my first outing with a dslr. The camera was a Nikon D700 and it was borrowed from a friend, along with a Nikon 28-300mm.  This was at one of the beaver ponds up in Lundy Canyon. Many of you know it well.

I never posted this previously and am curious to hear your thoughts, critiques and suggestions.

thanks!

Lon

Comments

12 comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on October 7, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Lon, This is very nice. This composition works great and the light is wonderful. The colors are beautiful, warm and inviting, then the reflections are just wonderful. I like it very much. 
Not bad for the first time out with a borrowed DSLR...cool

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on October 7, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Gosh, how quickly we travel through time. It's that season already......wink

What's not to like around the old Lundy Canyon beaver ponds. In fact, any and all of Lundy area.
This is very nice for your first go at the DSLR world, Lon. The autumn warm color is a real plus too. The two old snags seem to balance each other a bit. The one in the FG leaning left and the one in center BG leaning right......enlightened

As a side note: good luck next week out there. I'm headed to Utah at zero dark thirty tomorrow. I took a second on the house to cover fuel costs again......yikes.......sad
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on October 7, 2017 at 7:59 PM
This image is just screaming with quiet, Lon.  Very peaceful feel and I think I prefer the rippled reflection over a seldom seen glass reflection. The colors and the 50/50 comp work really well. When I first looked at this, the dark left side jumped out in the smaller version, but adds a proper sense of mystery in the large view. So, the larger question is "Do you regret the change?".  No nits from me, I like it.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on October 7, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Wonderfully composed, Lon. The rich but muted tones are beautiful. Hard to come up with improvement suggestions other than that I could see opening up the shadows a touch above the left shoreline. Nice work.  
Registered on December 10, 2015, 104 Posts, 1112 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on October 7, 2017 at 10:23 PM
Thanks for the comments thus far!

@Dave - I've had previous feedback about that darker area.  I'll take a look at that.  In fact, seeing this on NPN now, the image perhaps could be brightened, if only slightly.  It's a tad dark globally, and given this is in pretty much fill sun, all be it, late light, this could be brighter. Especially in the shadows.  Thanks for mentioning.

@Gary  

Do you regret the change?

If you mean going digital?  No I don't regret.  I still have a great love for just the whole process of the large format and being able to hold a piece of film in your hand.... But I certainly don't regret the switch. For me it was purely a practical decision, nothing more or less.  Of course now, I can click the shutter freely - which is 100 times more than before, which isn't always a good thing.  But I still enjoy  the ability to capture images of nature, being out there and just enjoying the experience.  That hasn't changed!  Thanks for asking!
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Kearl on October 8, 2017 at 11:04 AM
My only nit is is appears a bit crunchy (common jpeg compression?).
The colors are natural and very attractive.
No mention of your settings, but maybe a longer SS would have smoothed out the water a bit.
Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on October 8, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Thank you for the feedback, suggestions and observations!  I've incorporated a few changes, subtle, but hopefully an improvement.

@Paul - thanks!  And very interesting that you mentioned the "two snags."  One looks at an image too long, and I can tell you I never once noticed or considered that secondary snag! but now that you mention it, I see it! And their leanings.  Good stuff!

@Dave, I've raised the levels using a TK Triple play layer (yes, still using them!)  Any number of ways to increase the shadows there.

And @Dan, yeah, I see the crunchiness.  Happens a lot with fine detail like autumn leaves.  I use TK's web sharpening and for this alternate I backed way off on the opacity of the sharpening layer.  Hopefully this one is less crunchy.

It's one of the great things about providing and receiving feedback.  Having that opportunity to improve our images and our work.

Also, learning tips from Dan and some other examples by Dave - to try longer shutter speeds to see the effects in reflections where the water isn't just a mirror.  I'll have to remember this!

thanks again!
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on October 9, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Lovely, peaceful image, Lon.  I love the darker nature of the image and the wonderful composition, but I find the large, dark shadow on the left to be a real eye magnet.  It's stranger, the darkness in the reflection isn't so bothersome as the actual shadow.  I might try opening the shadow a good bit and see if that helps.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Rudy Ruberti on October 9, 2017 at 11:46 PM
Great colors here and I think opening up the shadows in the repost is even better.  This is one of my favorite areas for fall colors on the east side.  I'm also heading up this weekend and plan on a morning hike up Lundy.  I haven't been up yet this season but hear the colors around June Lake are at their peak.
Registered on October 28, 2008, 179 Posts, 1875 Comments
Comment posted by Anil Rao on October 11, 2017 at 2:46 AM
Hi Lon, I love the design of this composition. It is split in the middle but I find that if offers symmetry with a twist. I suppose that is courtesy of the dominant trunk and its slight lean. The colors are gorgeous and with the slightly opened up darks it is perfect.

I'll keep an eye out for your photos from this fall.
Registered on November 15, 2003, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments
Comment posted by Craig Moreau on October 12, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Lon, I'm really enjoying this scene. I think that you did well to brighten up that left shadow area. It doesn't pull my eye there in the repost. I still think it could be just a bit brighter in the lighter areas now.
Registered on April 21, 2015, 64 Posts, 584 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on October 12, 2017 at 1:05 PM
The repost looks very nice, Lon, especially the details in the shadows. To me, this looks a tad a on the red side, which is noticeable in the gree fir on the right. You might try reducing the red a bit and increasing brightness the yellow.

I have always liked the beaver ponds in Lundy, but it is challenging to get good compositions there. You did very well here.
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments