Prepping for Fall +RP
by Lon Overacker
Thanks again for your comments and suggestions on my previous image.
Alas, my Sonora Pass stockpile is dwindling. Good thing fall is here and I'm ready to head out and captures some new images. Heading out next Friday for a few days to catch a few days of fall in the Eastern Sierra.
Last time I was out there for fall color was 2015, which is when this image was taken. It was my first outing with a dslr. The camera was a Nikon D700 and it was borrowed from a friend, along with a Nikon 28-300mm. This was at one of the beaver ponds up in Lundy Canyon. Many of you know it well.
I never posted this previously and am curious to hear your thoughts, critiques and suggestions.
thanks!
Lon
Comments
12 commentsNot bad for the first time out with a borrowed DSLR...
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
What's not to like around the old Lundy Canyon beaver ponds. In fact, any and all of Lundy area.
This is very nice for your first go at the DSLR world, Lon. The autumn warm color is a real plus too. The two old snags seem to balance each other a bit. The one in the FG leaning left and the one in center BG leaning right......
As a side note: good luck next week out there. I'm headed to Utah at zero dark thirty tomorrow. I took a second on the house to cover fuel costs again......yikes.......
@Dave - I've had previous feedback about that darker area. I'll take a look at that. In fact, seeing this on NPN now, the image perhaps could be brightened, if only slightly. It's a tad dark globally, and given this is in pretty much fill sun, all be it, late light, this could be brighter. Especially in the shadows. Thanks for mentioning.
@Gary If you mean going digital? No I don't regret. I still have a great love for just the whole process of the large format and being able to hold a piece of film in your hand.... But I certainly don't regret the switch. For me it was purely a practical decision, nothing more or less. Of course now, I can click the shutter freely - which is 100 times more than before, which isn't always a good thing. But I still enjoy the ability to capture images of nature, being out there and just enjoying the experience. That hasn't changed! Thanks for asking!
The colors are natural and very attractive.
No mention of your settings, but maybe a longer SS would have smoothed out the water a bit.
@Paul - thanks! And very interesting that you mentioned the "two snags." One looks at an image too long, and I can tell you I never once noticed or considered that secondary snag! but now that you mention it, I see it! And their leanings. Good stuff!
@Dave, I've raised the levels using a TK Triple play layer (yes, still using them!) Any number of ways to increase the shadows there.
And @Dan, yeah, I see the crunchiness. Happens a lot with fine detail like autumn leaves. I use TK's web sharpening and for this alternate I backed way off on the opacity of the sharpening layer. Hopefully this one is less crunchy.
It's one of the great things about providing and receiving feedback. Having that opportunity to improve our images and our work.
Also, learning tips from Dan and some other examples by Dave - to try longer shutter speeds to see the effects in reflections where the water isn't just a mirror. I'll have to remember this!
thanks again!
I'll keep an eye out for your photos from this fall.
I have always liked the beaver ponds in Lundy, but it is challenging to get good compositions there. You did very well here.
--P