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Channel Open

by Preston Birdwell

Gallery: LandscapePosted September 20, 20179,495 views6 comments
This is a wider view of this nice cascade on Deadman's Creek. It is cropped a bit from the top, left side, and bottom. I chose a slightly faster shutter speed because I wanted to retain some texture in the water above the chute, and the white water in the lower right corner.

Nikon D7100
Nikkor 18-140mm @ 75mm
f-16 @ 1/25, ISO 100
ACR and PS-CC
TK's Masks

Please see the large version. Thanks!

Your thoughts are always appreciated. cool
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Comments

6 comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on September 20, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Nice, but not up there with my PB faves. Something about the whitewater lower right is throwing me off a bit, but cannot quite figure it out. Processing looks real good. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on September 20, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Hey Preston,

I really like the balance between the rock and flowing water.  The granite on opposite corners, joined by the water that is carving things up.

I think the shutter speed works nicely given the dynamics of the scene.  I had mentioned to you, but will mention here, the water flow varies here, causing different effects because the speed changes.  The water going through the chute picks up speed and so the texture smooths out a bit, which is my favorite part of the flowing water, btw.  On the left, the water is pooled up and not moving as fast or all in the same direction, so it gives the impressin of a faster shutter speed, hence more detail and texture, which is what y ou were going for!  So kudos on that! ;-) 

And good job retaining some detail in the lower right.  I can kinda see where Harley is going with the water in the LR.  It's almost like it's unresolved? Perhaps one of those times when you either need more room to get an idea of what the water is doing, where it's going, OR not have the upsplash at all?  That's something I probably wouldn't have picked up on in the field while we were there. Easy backset driving here.  ;-)

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on September 20, 2017 at 10:29 PM
The composition is strong in this image. But it's not as good as some of the previous ones and it's interesting to see why. Part of the problem is that the water in upper left looks more out of focus than actually showing movement. These water images are hard to predict without shooting and looking at the result because the mind doesn't visualize a long ss. I thought 'Sliding Seaward' was your most succesful image so I would make changes to match those maybe. (1) cool the overall image somewhat (2) bring out the colors in the water more, the blues, greens, and yellows. 

I find the foreground really effective here in a way that's not obvious. It adds to the image without being obvious. The strip of green is interesting because it draws you to it yet it doesn't really interfere. It also repeats the direction of most of this image.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on September 21, 2017 at 11:10 AM
A different look here from most of your waterfall scenes, Preston. Processing looks good and I do like the flow from ULHC to LRHC.
So seems a bit centered, but another look gives a bit of diagonal flow for me......laugh
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on September 21, 2017 at 1:57 PM
I like the sense of splash in the upper left and that fine wave structure in the lower right, Preston.  Connecting with the greenish water in the middle works very well.  The contrast between the moving water and the surrounding rocks is good also.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Craig Moreau on September 22, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Preston, I like this, but agree with some others who have mentioned feeling thrown off a bit. I think the sudden direction change in the water so close to the corner is what's doing it for me.
Shutter speed looks great here, even with the varying water speed, and I really like the lower left green and upper right tiny pool of water and how they anchor their corners.
Registered on April 21, 2015, 64 Posts, 584 Comments