Gallery: LandscapePosted September 15, 20175,874 views12 comments
A smokey El Capitan before it really got smokey. Thanks for having a look. I tried to make the best of the smokey conditions in Yosemite last week.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on September 15, 2017 at 11:56 AM
Eva,
When you said you tried to make the best of the conditions....you most certainly did. I'll go so far as to say that the conditions allowed you to capture and create something that we just don't see that often. My first thought was like this image could have been pulled out of a book or advertisement from the turn of the previous century; it just has a timeless look to it. Primarily because of the hazy light and color of El Cap and the smokey sky. The addition of the tall pines and the Merced bring us more current, but I'm really enjoying the unique look of this. What makes this even more special is that I've seen this view a thousand times.. (well, maybe hundreds) and this is a new and different look. Yes, you made lemonade...
Just a thought. Wondering if you've considered a sepia toned b&w? That would even take it back to the days of John Muir.
Lon
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Comment posted by John Williams on September 15, 2017 at 12:41 PM
I agree with Lon's thoughts about the retro look; the smoke adds an interesting effect. I'd love to see a toned version too!
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Comment posted by Norma Tareila Matl on September 15, 2017 at 4:29 PM
I do like the El cap very much. Great photo.
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on September 16, 2017 at 12:59 AM
Thanks Lon, John, and Norma. I was very disappointed with the smokey conditions while in Yosemite but now realize, after reviewing my images, that I may have some very unique images due to those smoky conditions. Lon and John, I am going to try a sepia tone
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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on September 16, 2017 at 11:43 AM
You lined things up beautifully, Eva. I think it's great that you were able to use these adverse conditions to your advantage here to create some exquisite separation of the image's elements.
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Comment posted by Stephen Stanton on September 16, 2017 at 3:56 PM
A wonderful soft image of El Cap.
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Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on September 17, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Overall placement of the trees in the scene is perfect from this POV, Eva. Would expect nothing less from your very experienced perspective.....
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Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on September 17, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Eva, smoke has been the 'order of the day' for most of the west this year. I think you did a great job on this. The haze gives El Cap a sort of dreamy look while the Merced is cool and inviting. Well done.
--P
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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on September 17, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Lovely image, Eva. I was there Sept 4-8. I haven't even downloaded my images yet. I was so disappointed by the smoke, the cancellation of some Glacier Point events. Spent two of the four days wondering whether I was seeing half dome or a hazy edge of the sun...it was that bad. This gives me hope that I might have something to work on.
And of course, my disappointment is not relevant to the big scheme of things. There are might have been due for a fire, and Yosemite's many faces no doubt include this one.
My only nit: might crop a tish to get rid of the half-tree on the left.
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on September 18, 2017 at 2:01 AM
Thanks everyone. We were there Sept. 5 through Sept 7 Marylynne.
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Comment posted by Michael Lowe on September 18, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Nice.
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Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on September 19, 2017 at 10:54 AM
I like the pale contrast of the background that the smoke afforded. My thought would have been to set up just a little more to the left to expose a bit more of the cliff from behind the trees, but that would also mess up the vertical aspect ratio.
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12 commentsWhen you said you tried to make the best of the conditions....you most certainly did. I'll go so far as to say that the conditions allowed you to capture and create something that we just don't see that often. My first thought was like this image could have been pulled out of a book or advertisement from the turn of the previous century; it just has a timeless look to it. Primarily because of the hazy light and color of El Cap and the smokey sky. The addition of the tall pines and the Merced bring us more current, but I'm really enjoying the unique look of this. What makes this even more special is that I've seen this view a thousand times.. (well, maybe hundreds) and this is a new and different look. Yes, you made lemonade...
Just a thought. Wondering if you've considered a sepia toned b&w? That would even take it back to the days of John Muir.
Lon
--P
And of course, my disappointment is not relevant to the big scheme of things. There are might have been due for a fire, and Yosemite's many faces no doubt include this one.
My only nit: might crop a tish to get rid of the half-tree on the left.