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by gary phillips

Gallery: LandscapePosted March 9, 20176,739 views16 comments
I want to run a few of the images from the same catch basin taken over the course of a week or so, by you guys.    I keep coming back to this image and have worked and reworked it a few times. I love it, but my wife, not so much.  She's usually a pretty good judge, but not always.laugh

iso 100, 70-200mm with 1.4 TC @ 280mm, f/16, 1/100s

Your comments and critiques are very helpful and greatly appreciated.

Better large.

Comments

16 comments
Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on March 9, 2017 at 5:46 AM
I find this pretty compelling, Gary ( never mind what the wife thinks !! )  Beautifully composed, great tonal range and a lovely contrast between the sharpness of the branches and the soft, blurry reflections.
Registered on May 18, 2007, 1108 Posts, 7647 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on March 9, 2017 at 8:16 AM
This is extremely cool! What a visual mind-ahhhhhhhh, well, you know. I really, really hate to contradict Nancy, but.............

I love it. Great visualization and processing. 

 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on March 9, 2017 at 12:56 PM
I was unsure about the visual chaos in the image at first. But the circle formed by the limb and the reflection on the right keeps drawing my eye and gives a point of reference. Interesting image. I had one image that my wife said interesting but she would not want it on her wall. It won best landscape in show in a competition. It is now hanging on the wall.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on March 9, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Gary, I can see why you like this image. And I can see why your wife doesn't like. IMO it hasn't been fully visualized. With your permission, I hope, I am posting how I visualize this image (from a screen dump). Hopefully the missus will like this more.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on March 9, 2017 at 4:12 PM
I like this a lot, Gary. There is a certain order in the chaos that works for me. I love the curved trunk and its reflection. The processing looks real nice.
--P
 
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Prashant Khapane on March 9, 2017 at 5:51 PM
This is very cool Gary. Love it as is. Only way to improve is crop the RHS tree branch. My eyes get drawn to that edge.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 492 Posts, 4580 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on March 9, 2017 at 9:17 PM
Very cool, Gary. The twisting, curving trunk is terrific, and gives this image a very artisitic touch. I like this a lot.
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on March 9, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Igor, that is exactly what my wife had in mind.  I cropped, recropped, reprocessed, recropped and returned to my original iteration.  I knew that a more balanced and more importantly, less reflection, would be more acceptable to more people.  What really attracted me to this image was that, even in camera, I liked the unbalanced composition.  Something that I saw and felt at that time felt right to me.  One of the coolest things about photography, is that two or three people can photograph the same area, on the same day and come up with their own interpretations of what they saw and felt. Even the same scene, shot at essentially at the same time.  Processing alone, of the very same images, will have an individual footprint.  I love that we all look at what we do through a very personal lens.  That is the beauty of photography and art in general.   You always have total permission to critique, criticize, or just generally tell me what you think. That also goes for everyone at NPN.   Absolutely, that's what this is about.  I love it and my wife loves your visualization.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on March 10, 2017 at 12:22 AM
Gary,

You continue to amaze with your vision!  I love this!  It's just not something one runs across every day... The random chaos of the branches and their reflection are wonderful, but surrounding the little "portal" to the water and reflection beyond makes this work for me. Crop or not.

If it makes  you feel any better, my wife wouldn't like this one either.... Her reasoning is poor eyesight (which is true, without glasses/contacts she's like 800/20, legally blind.) which means she doesn't like finely detailed images like this, my grasses images, etc. So as you've hinted, process and crop to what you think works or what your vision is.

Again, while there may be some viable crops, I like this square presentation and the larger reflected limbs being able to extend in to the reflected bottom.

Can't wait for the next one.  I can only imagine what's coming next. Wait, no, I can't imagine.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Kathy Barnhart on March 10, 2017 at 12:34 AM
Gary, I much prefer your version to Igor's and I can't really explain why. I like where the main "trunk" enters the water in yours. This image is a unique one, and very special. You had a keen eye to see this and make an image that is so compelling.
Registered on November 11, 2011, 404 Posts, 1639 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on March 10, 2017 at 12:47 AM
Love this - great lines, reflections, and water swirls.
Even wives are not always right   angel
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on March 10, 2017 at 9:01 AM
A word about wives and this applies to any critiques by non photographers:

i find them enormously helpful. I almost always ask my 20 year old son to look at an image that I'm working on and 95% of the time he's right. I can't explain why I, who has put all this time into photography, don't seem to have much better judgment than someone who hasn't, but it's there. 

Im also involved in a Facebook account that posts images where people voice their opinion with 'likes' and I choose a weekly pick each week. Again I'm amazed at how accurately people with little knowledge of photography get it right. 

It's actually very encouraging to know how easy it is to reach most people with images. 

Whats interesting is that although many easily recognize a good image they can't seem to create one. It's actually quite puzzling. 
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on March 10, 2017 at 12:24 PM
No doubt a very intriguing and unique image, Gary. The sort of image that you need to pause and ponder. It is a bit busy and I wonder if that is why your wife has objections. I'm wondering if trying some crops to eliminate the left hand side brush could simplify and make more order out of the comp.?
Registered on December 10, 2015, 104 Posts, 1112 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on March 10, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Those twisted trees are a great subject, but the water/reflection makes is enjoyable as an abstract.  It is a bit chaotic, though the smooth water helps calm me down.  In this case, the choppy portions of the water may add to the more unsettling feel, which are compounded by the branches above water.  Thought provoking image, very artistic view.  
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on March 10, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Gary, I love this image.  I actually like your original image best, although Igor's is very nice too.  I like the fact the entire tree reflection is visible in yours.  Excellent composition and the B&W conversion is perfect.  This is good photography!
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Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on March 12, 2017 at 3:40 AM
Well that is trippy.  Nice find!

aF
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments