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Lee Vining Creek Cascade + rp
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Lee Vining Creek Cascade + rp

by Preston Birdwell

Gallery: LandscapePosted October 16, 2016323 views14 comments
Early on an Autumn day in October 2007, I was wandering around Lee Vining Creek near the Aspen Campground. I liked how the flow of the water leads through the rock and then back to the nice color in the forest behind.

Tachihara 4x5
Nikkor-M 300mm
Astia 100F
f-22½ @ 8 seconds
TK's Masks and some dodge/burn

Please see the large version. Thanks!

Your thoughts are always appreciated. cool
--P

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on October 16, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Pretty little cascade with an autumn backdrop. I like this with the cyan and blue saturation backed way off. 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on October 16, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Lee Vining? I would have guessed the Merced just outside the park. Good composition, everything feels balanced. The larger version is considerably better. I would have chose a faster SS but that's just personal preference. Nice job.

I just npticed Harley's comment about the overall blue sense of this. This was likely shot in shadowed light so some warming might be a good idea. The light gives the image a bit of a flat look. Perhaps some luminosity can be added in postprocessing.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on October 16, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Thanks, gents. I backed off on the blue/cyan hue/sat.

Igor: It was very early in the day. In order to get decent depth of field I was pretty much locked-in to the longish exposure in order to place the high values in the water where I wanted them.
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on October 16, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Preston, extremely well done considering the low light conditions this spot presents. Especially difficult with film and the water flow.  I kind of lean more towards the first one, but both are very well processed.
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on October 16, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Hi  Prestoncrying   For  color on the stones.       I    like  the   warmer repost.        but   the   larger original   version   is    very  fine photography that  only  a  4x5  can  give

Albert Darmo
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on October 16, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Fine work, Preston, a beautiful image with wonderful flow for the eye to follow throughout the frame.  The astia film really held the contrast nicely.  You must have been right on the limits of the DOF at f22.5 with the tilt you must have used.  The larger image is really nice with the slightly deeper darks, at least to my eye.  An exquisite image.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on October 17, 2016 at 12:23 PM
The repost is is sweet!  Reducing the blue/cyan makes a big difference.  Excellent composition.  I wish your chosen shutter speed was a bit faster to increase definition in the water but understand the limitations produced due to dim light and ISO with film.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on October 17, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Preston, This is truly a wonderful image. This composition works great and is so very pleasing to view. I love how the water cascades around all the rocks and then that beautiful autumn color makes a perfect background. I actually like the original post the best for just pure viewing pleasure. Not too much cyan at all on my monitor...just a beautiful image!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on October 17, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Preston: A wonderful scene and a superb capture. I prefer the original since I think the subtle blue contrasts nicely with the BG. Marvelous.>=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on October 18, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Preston, my preference would be for some of the blue to be added back into the water.  The fall colors make a nice background to the scene.
Registered on April 1, 2010, 196 Posts, 1592 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Richter on October 18, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Preston, I appreciate your composition with the mixture of elements and the multidirectional flow, well anchored by the rocks to my eye. Your first version conveys the atmosphere consistently to me.

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Lowe on October 18, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Excellent shot. I must be weird cause I like the original post better. I always get comments about the cyan tint of water in my images. I personally prefer that Velvia look. It adds a little coolness.devil
Registered on February 11, 2004, 777 Posts, 5252 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on October 19, 2016 at 11:46 PM
Really a pleasant composition with great textures and balanced light.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on October 22, 2016 at 7:53 AM
I think I am in the minority, but the comp feels a bit unbalanced to me. The rock seems to be the center point and the cascades too much on the periphery.  Since they are brighter I want to see more of them but my eye is on the edges of the image.  A slightly different angle to include more of the water around the rock would have been my choice, but not being there you might have had limitations I'm not aware of.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments