Gallery: AvianPosted September 28, 201671 views7 comments
Dead Sea Sparrow / Passer moabiticus
1DX - 600 mm f/4 II
1/3200
f/4
ISO 100
On bean bag
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7 comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on September 28, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Excellent image of a bird I've never seen. Sharp feather detail, and it's "fluffed-up" pose and head turn is nice.
Fine work!
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on September 28, 2016 at 6:08 PM
A cool looking sparrow, Basri. I like the fluffed out look and the nice clean bg. The bird seems a bit centered vertically to me and if you have the detail you might look at a slightly tighter crop, decentering the bird more, to see if you like it that way.
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Barbara Graham on September 29, 2016 at 1:57 AM
Beautiful colors, detail and background. I think I agree with Dennis about the centering but would only change it slightly if I did change it.
Registered on July 27, 2010, 1310 Posts, 5035 Comments
Comment posted by Keith Bauer on September 29, 2016 at 12:30 PM
While I like the bird fluffed up on the perch, the composition doesn't work for me. I think it is much too centered and the completely vertical line (perch) accentuates it even more. I played with a couple options to not only decenter, but rotate the crop just a bit so the perch is angled a little. Bird still looks perfectly natural with some rotation of the crop.
Registered on November 20, 2003, 458 Posts, 4836 Comments
Comment posted by Steve Thompson on September 29, 2016 at 3:46 PM
This is very nice and sharp Basri. I agree with others about it being too centered. Even just a vertical crop may work better. Cool shot though, worth taking another look without a doubt.
Registered on August 7, 2014, 125 Posts, 2319 Comments
Comment posted by Nate Chappell on October 1, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Beautiful little bird, thanks for sharing Basri, I agree on the need to move this out of the center, one way to do so would be to just take some off the left.
Registered on February 1, 2006, 1158 Posts, 19528 Comments
Comment posted by Basri Akcasoy on October 6, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Thank so very much for your all constructive comment and criticism. After your comments , I've worked some other alternatives. Yes you are right, all of these alternative better than posted one. I attached 3 different alternative.
Ones again thank you very much...
Registered on February 16, 2012, 118 Posts, 767 Comments
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7 commentsFine work!
Sandy
Ones again thank you very much...