+RP 100 Sq. Yards #2
by Lon Overacker
Same concept, different tree, different part of El Cap, 18min later.
This one a little warmer and brighter than the previous post.
Your comments, critiques and suggestions most welcome on this attempt.
Nikon D800E
Nikon 28-300mm @150mm
f/20 1/20th
Tony Kuyper's masks and actions.
Thanks for looking!
Lon
Comments
15 commentsvery nice image, but I also prefer the prior image due to being able to see the wall behind, which with the sun on its features makes the image have power.
cheers. Tom
1. The overall layout of the tree. The 1st image has the bg evenly popping out through the branches throughout the image. In this one it goes from no bg to no fg. I just like the other approach.
2. I like that the snow is bluer and flatter in the 1st image. It plays off better against the warm wall. In addition shadows look naturally flat so it also looks more realistic to me.
Although if if there was nothing to compare this image to its a 'home run'.
Albert Darmo
Canada
Then Igor writes:
Lesson learned? All images should stand on their own right? If I (or anyone) posts similar images back to back, there will naturally be a comparison. I knew that too, but had this been shown independantly without knowledge of the first, would there be different feedback? hmmmmm
@Mark - thanks for the comment and observation about the tiny branches up top. I actually cloned some small ones on the right edge. I was wondering if anyone was going to suggest a crop. I actually played with a significant crop because I was also unsure about the large branch in the LLC. Always options and alternatives.
Thanks again. I guess I'll post the 3rd one in a day or so.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
very nice image, but I also prefer the prior image due to being able to see the wall behind, which with the sun on its features makes the image have power.
cheers. Tom
Thanks for the feedback everyone!
edit: changes are pretty subtle now that it's posted...