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Scroll 4 Repost of Mt Hood w/ Juniper
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Scroll 4 Repost of Mt Hood w/ Juniper

by Marylynne Diggs

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 2, 2015131 views8 comments
Here is the next in my series of black and white images I'm considering for a B/W portfolio.  I cannot begin to thank all of you enough for the feedback I have already received on the preceding images.  As I share the ones to follow (about another 10, I think), I'll be especially interested in whether you think they measure up to the quality of the ones I've already shared.  If any of these leave you totally flat (like, whatever....) then please say so.

As always suggestions for improvement (especially relating to composition, contrast, etc) are much appreciated.

Canon 7D with 24-105mm at 105mm
ISO 125, f/8, 1/800 sec
Conversion in Nik SilverEfex with LR finishing
 

Comments

8 comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on December 2, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Marylynne, I like looking at this and the ovarall impact it has is quite nice. The pano format works great and I'm wishing I could see it even larger. At first I thought the tree got lost a bit with the dark background but in the large version it starts to come back because of the snow covered branches. I like the contrast with the snow on Mt Hood against the dark sky. Has a nice dramatic mood to it. I really love the looks and exposure of the snow on the mountain. It really has a nice texture as well.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by David Schoen on December 2, 2015 at 5:09 PM
The tonal variations on the mountain are excellent.  The separation between the foreground and the mountain by the forest makes the image work due to the smooth texture of the FG and the undulated testure of Mt. Hood.  I wish the tree was a little closer to the mountain.
Registered on November 6, 2006, 1213 Posts, 4587 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on December 2, 2015 at 8:11 PM
I like the multiple layers ranging from nearly white to nealy black, Marylynne. Looks like the perfect image for calibrating a monitor. As mentioned previously, the tree is somewhat lost in the dark bg behind it, but the image still works well for me. 
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Gavin on December 2, 2015 at 8:21 PM
The larger version is the one to view and study.  This image is very beautiful.  Only nit: looks like a sign on the far right lower portion where the foreground snow meets the dark hills.
Registered on August 14, 2008, 293 Posts, 1250 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on December 3, 2015 at 1:33 AM
Hi Marylynne, I like this image a lot.  The large view really shows the detail that is not apparent in the smaller view.  I think that the tree lower left plays a significant part in this image and is located so close to the horizon line that it sorta blends in.  This is one instance where I could see a car top perch, ala Ansel Adams, to elevate the camera enough to contain the tree in the confines of the horizon.  I would also clone the the two posts on the right side.  The gradient in large shows some very dark corners, left and right top that you might think about leveling out with the natural gradient.  At any rate I  think it is a very nice B/W image and the detail in Mt Hood is very good and I also like the simplicity of the composition.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on December 3, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Thanks for the feedback everyone.  I can't believe that I never saw the fence posts in my processing!  I suppose this should be in Man and Nature given the distant powerlines as well.  Nonetheless, here is a new version, with a little more detail in the tree.  I can't seem to see the darkened corners, but I'll take a look on my work computer to see if that shows something.

Regarding a higher perspective, I think I actually was standing on the truck tailgate for this.  The image was taken from the side of a road on the Warm Springs Indian Reservation, and there was a fence and a ditch between me and the tree, and then the "pasture" is a bit higher than the road itself.  It's actually a fairly challenging area to shoot, and one that requires a fair amount restraint in order to respect tribal land. 

Let me know if this is better or if you see other things that could be improved. Thanks again, as always, for all your help and suggestions.
Registered on December 14, 2010, 122 Posts, 1034 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on December 3, 2015 at 6:07 PM
I love the starkness of this. The tones look very nice; the whites on Mt. Hood, especially. You've got a fine series going, Marylynne.

--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Roel Wijtmans on December 4, 2015 at 12:03 PM
My only suggestion would also be a higher vantage point to make that tree stand out more, but that does not seem to be that easy. Nevertheless this is very nice work, I like it!
Registered on September 30, 2012, 116 Posts, 2257 Comments