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Autumn Dream Abstract
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Autumn Dream Abstract

by Eva McDermott

Gallery: LandscapePosted November 18, 20155,376 views15 comments
An in camera abstract (not motion blur; using Ian Cameron's technique) taken in my backyard in NH. 

Canon 5DM2
Canon 24-70mm f/2.8L at 51mm
ISO100 1/40sec f/11

Thanks for having a look and for any comment and critiques.

Comments

15 comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on November 18, 2015 at 10:21 PM
This is a very colorful and interesting mix of blur and sharp, Eva.  Sure has me wondering about the "how to", since you say it's not motion blur.
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on November 18, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Hi Mark.  I used Ian's technique of Vasaline on an old filter.  Depending on how you smooth out the film, you can get different areas of blur and sharpeness.  In this case the Vasaline was smeared on the filter in the horizontal direction. 
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on November 19, 2015 at 1:08 AM
Wow, this is really cool Eva. I like how the foliage is sharp but the upper area is blurred in a vertical direction. Very unusual. We (NPN) seem to be doing a lot of abstracts suddenly. I wonder why. I can see a fine composition where the sky is ommited, but that's not what you were after. Very nice creative image.
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on November 19, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Thanks Igor.  I can see were a square comp with out the sky may be stronger.  Some idea to play around with.
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Comment posted by Ian Cameron on November 19, 2015 at 3:11 AM
Very colourful and a beautiful vaseline smear Eva. 
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on November 19, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Going back to the old school tricks!  This turned out very well, Eva. Did you also shoot it without the Vaseline? It would be interesting to compare the two if you did.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on November 19, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Nicely done, Eva. The effect is very interesting. The composition lends itself to this trick. You migh consider pulling the cyan down a tad. I love the Autmn colors.

--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on November 19, 2015 at 11:42 AM
Hi  Evacrying  I love seeing  creative  abstracts  posted  at landscape.  the vasaline  smear  made the colors and detail  are just  right  to  hold  my attention.


Albert Darmo
Canada
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Roel Wijtmans on November 19, 2015 at 12:26 PM
My first thought was the same as Igor's, crop out the sky. I think that would add a bit more atmosphere to it. Great colors and comp, sure looks like a nice backyard. I must try that vaseline trick some day, looks very cool.
Registered on September 30, 2012, 116 Posts, 2257 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 19, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Hi Eva,

I'm still intrigued by how the technique produces the results.  I guess I just don't get how a "horizontal smear" could produce the perception of vertical motion.  But it doesn't matter really, at all - it's the result that matters and this is a success!

Like other comments, I may experiment with either cropping the blue up top or doing something with the color - either desat or something with the cyan.  I really like the warmth of the image without the top 1/4 or so, but of course that's all just personal choice and what you like.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on November 19, 2015 at 4:36 PM
Hi Eva, This is really cool looking. I like what that vasaline effect did with this scene. The light and colors just add that much more to this as well. It does look good without the blue sky too. Nice backyard!!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
 
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Comment posted by Richard Wong on November 19, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Really cool effect Eva. I like how the middle stays sharp but everything else has the dreamy motion look.
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Comment posted by Richard Teller on November 19, 2015 at 6:35 PM
Interesting abstract with really great colors and light.
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Comment posted by Kathy Barnhart on November 20, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Love the motion and the colors, lines, and shapes. The overall darkened mood is perfect for fall. I like the blue at the top, but I might think about cropping just a tad as it is the lightest part of the photo and the eye goes there. Still, a lovely image.
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Comment posted by Mark Metternich on November 23, 2015 at 8:50 PM
SO COOL!  Congrats! 
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