Comment posted by Alberto Patiño on May 25, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Ian, this is very beautiful. I think that the vignetting is the right idea, given the complexity of the subject, but I wonder if it might be a bit too strong and "sharp"? Perhaps you could feather in the edges of the vignette more gradually?
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Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on May 25, 2015 at 6:20 PM
Ian - Looks quite artistic and pretty to me.
Cropping some from the right puts the blooms in the thirds position as well. I do not mind the cram effect on the right but the hitn of additional blooms there is somewhat confusing.
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Comment posted by Bill Fach on May 25, 2015 at 9:45 PM
Ian: The cram effect works really well here for me and I like your DOF/POF choice very much. Nicely done.>=))>
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Comment posted by Nathan Buck on May 26, 2015 at 1:15 AM
I like the broader view, Ian. Though busier, it is still a pleasant view. I can understand the way that the cram effect works, but I can also understand the other's thoughts on why it looks like a vignette. Overall, this works for me.
Nathan
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Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on May 27, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Goo DOF and beautiful flowers against a wonderful BG. I agree with Ram about the hint of blossoms.
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5 commentsIan, this is very beautiful. I think that the vignetting is the right idea, given the complexity of the subject, but I wonder if it might be a bit too strong and "sharp"? Perhaps you could feather in the edges of the vignette more gradually?
Ian - Looks quite artistic and pretty to me.
Cropping some from the right puts the blooms in the thirds position as well. I do not mind the cram effect on the right but the hitn of additional blooms there is somewhat confusing.
Ian: The cram effect works really well here for me and I like your DOF/POF choice very much. Nicely done.>=))>
I like the broader view, Ian. Though busier, it is still a pleasant view. I can understand the way that the cram effect works, but I can also understand the other's thoughts on why it looks like a vignette. Overall, this works for me.
Nathan
Goo DOF and beautiful flowers against a wonderful BG. I agree with Ram about the hint of blossoms.