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More Snow and Sparrows

by Jim Zablotny

Gallery: AvianPosted February 15, 2015213 views10 comments
I followed the advice of several NPN photographers and worked on some double processing to get detail in the snow and maintain some brightness on the tree sparrow. This bird was eating snow to pick up some moisture after feeding at the bird feeder. I also used several luminosity masks with opacity adjustments on the layers to tweak the expanded midtones, super brights, and shadow darks. I finished it up with TK's make it glow while reducing this layer to 30% opacity. Let me know what you think. I know that I'm almost done with tree sparrows for the winter. Thanks for lookin'.......................Jim

Comments

10 comments
Comment posted by Alberto Patiño on February 15, 2015 at 8:28 PM
I'd say that the hard work paid off. You have snowflakes in a wide range of focus positions that, to me, give the image a very dynamic feel, it is as if you can feel the snow falling and blowing in the wind. The detail on the sparrow is excellent and the light is very natural (the snowflakes on its beak a plus!). The pine needless and snow on the tree lack a bit of contrast in my view, but I'm not sure that there is much you can do about that, my only suggestion would be to crop a little from the bottom, but then the shape may become a bit weird. I hope this helps! :toast:
Registered on December 2, 2014, 278 Posts, 1736 Comments
Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on February 15, 2015 at 9:56 PM
Perfect as is and Christmas Card ready! :toast:
Registered on July 24, 2006, 2741 Posts, 12349 Comments
Comment posted by Stephen Kaluski on February 16, 2015 at 4:15 AM
Hi Jim, for me what your image illustrates is that it does not need to be exotic to be excellent. These humble birds are often forgotten, however (and this is the part that just elevates it from the norm) couple with the 'perch' and the environment, conditions/scene they all add up to create a very pleasing image.

If I look at both images on two screens side by side at the larger size, there are some subtle changes in the latest one which are I do think are better, although :smile: :

- I prefer the brighter snow on the original and you can still extract the finer detail (retaining the brighter 'colouring') without it looking too flat and grey
- The cooler BKG in the second one is better, perhaps a tad more cooler, but personal pref
- The snow in the original looks more 'swept in, the second looks gently falling, either works, great backdrop
- Prefer the side on of the original, but the space around the subject in the second, LOL

Just my thoughts, irrespective this is still a very pleasing and enjoyable image to view.

TFS
Steve :toast:
Registered on March 25, 2007, 189 Posts, 1064 Comments
Comment posted by Keith Bauer on February 16, 2015 at 8:42 AM
Hi Jim:
I do like the mood of these images in the snow. The perch is great and the falling snow adds a lot.
For me this image is a bit on the flat side. With all the processing you performed, when looking at the snow (in the histogram) it isn't quite white. Here's a version with one adjustment, a levels adjustment layer. All I did was push the white point into 223 and the black point to 15. See what you think
Registered on November 20, 2003, 458 Posts, 4836 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Zablotny on February 16, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Hi thank you for all the comments. Keith, I was checking out the levels on my original tiff file and noticed the white point needed adjusting. Pushing that white up seems to have done the trick. I also tweaked up the brightness a tad too. Once again thank you :wavey: ...................Jim
Registered on January 17, 2004, 705 Posts, 3594 Comments
Comment posted by Stephen Kaluski on February 16, 2015 at 10:24 AM
That's where it needs to be Jim. :toast:
Registered on March 25, 2007, 189 Posts, 1064 Comments
Comment posted by Ken Watkins on February 16, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Jim,
I actually prefer the original, as I am a fan of unstreched and muted colour where appropriate:toast: :toast:
Registered on December 15, 2010, 1537 Posts, 4877 Comments
Comment posted by Nate Chappell on February 16, 2015 at 5:16 PM
For me what puts this above the other images you posted of this species is that the head turn is much better here. The reposted image is better, particularly the brighter snow, I could go either way on the bird. In any event, it's a lovely shot Jim. :toast:
Registered on February 1, 2006, 1158 Posts, 19528 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Jones on February 16, 2015 at 10:10 PM
I like 'em all, but I think this one is my favorite, with the snow on the face and in the air.
This has a nice, quiet mood. As an alternative, I think "whitening" the snow just a bit in curves increasing the contrast in the light areas to retain the texture, would give you a more "cheery" version.
Registered on April 18, 2007, 953 Posts, 6435 Comments
Comment posted by Hans Overduin on February 17, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Not much to add, except that I like the image a lot, both the original and Keith's version. Although the vertical image works well here, slightly more space on the right would have made it even more attractive, but this is only a minor critic, since I really think you did an excellent job here :toast: , cheers, Hans
Registered on August 31, 2011, 491 Posts, 3807 Comments