More Snow and Sparrows
by Jim Zablotny
I followed the advice of several NPN photographers and worked on some double processing to get detail in the snow and maintain some brightness on the tree sparrow. This bird was eating snow to pick up some moisture after feeding at the bird feeder. I also used several luminosity masks with opacity adjustments on the layers to tweak the expanded midtones, super brights, and shadow darks. I finished it up with TK's make it glow while reducing this layer to 30% opacity. Let me know what you think. I know that I'm almost done with tree sparrows for the winter. Thanks for lookin'.......................Jim
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10 commentsIf I look at both images on two screens side by side at the larger size, there are some subtle changes in the latest one which are I do think are better, although
- I prefer the brighter snow on the original and you can still extract the finer detail (retaining the brighter 'colouring') without it looking too flat and grey
- The cooler BKG in the second one is better, perhaps a tad more cooler, but personal pref
- The snow in the original looks more 'swept in, the second looks gently falling, either works, great backdrop
- Prefer the side on of the original, but the space around the subject in the second, LOL
Just my thoughts, irrespective this is still a very pleasing and enjoyable image to view.
TFS
Steve
I do like the mood of these images in the snow. The perch is great and the falling snow adds a lot.
For me this image is a bit on the flat side. With all the processing you performed, when looking at the snow (in the histogram) it isn't quite white. Here's a version with one adjustment, a levels adjustment layer. All I did was push the white point into 223 and the black point to 15. See what you think
I actually prefer the original, as I am a fan of unstreched and muted colour where appropriate
This has a nice, quiet mood. As an alternative, I think "whitening" the snow just a bit in curves increasing the contrast in the light areas to retain the texture, would give you a more "cheery" version.