Gallery: LandscapePosted February 8, 2015147 views10 comments
In the Mont Blanc (western Alps-Italy) group.
Hand-held 14 mm. samyang with Sony A7r.
Thank you and all the best,
sandro
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10 comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on February 9, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Welcome to NPN, Sandro!
Interesting details in the moraine. If your editing software has the capability, you might attempt to bring up the detail in the dark area in the immediate foreground. Since the main subject is the moraine, the distant peaks and the sky, you might consider cropping this from the top. The color looks nice and natural.
We're looking forward to your participation at NPN!
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on February 9, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Welcome to NPN.
This looks like an interesting place Looks like a sweeping view of these mountains. I would try to lighten up the shadow area just a bit and bring out some detail as suggested. And darken down the sunlig area to give it more definition.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Sandro Bisotti on February 9, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Thank you much Preston and Igor for your so interesting criticisms.
All the best,
Sandro
Registered on February 8, 2015, 30 Posts, 265 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on February 9, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Welcome aboard!! This is a real good perspective and nice detail on the foreground rocks. I like Preston's suggestions, too.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on February 9, 2015 at 8:31 PM
I will add my welcome to NPN. Photography is very subjective. I will give you my thoughts. I like the view you have here. I would try cropping this fromt he bottom, just above the brighter large rock and then lighten the darker rocks. I am looking forward to more of your posts.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on February 9, 2015 at 11:49 PM
I also like the perspective, and the emphasis on the moraine. I think the suggestions given are worth a try too. My only real suggestion would have been to use a tripod, and cable release.
Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on February 10, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Great FG interest, perhaps a bit less of it?
A pano comp might work well for this, just a thought.
Welcome Sandro
Registered on July 24, 2008, 1201 Posts, 10758 Comments
Comment posted by Sandro Bisotti on February 10, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Thank you much Richard and Chris.
I'm passionate both with traditional (also with large format camera and plan films) and digital photography.
About 80/90% of my images are landscapes and natural close-up, my reference photographers are Ansel Adams, Edward Weston,
Vittorio Sella....
I'll upload my humble digital works here, but (it's not kindness) I enjoy myself more in writing about the other one's image.
Again not kindness, but I like much the general style (ok, each of us is unique and unique our images, but I see a certain good general taste) here and the criticism is not ever easy.for me. I hope that also my simple and sincere "clap hands" will be accepted.
All the best!
Sandro
Registered on February 8, 2015, 30 Posts, 265 Comments
Comment posted by Sandro Bisotti on February 10, 2015 at 6:27 PM
Thank you Howard, interesting and valid suggestion.
All the best!
Sandro
Registered on February 8, 2015, 30 Posts, 265 Comments
Comment posted by Ryan Shain on February 10, 2015 at 9:42 PM
Welcome Sandro,
I really enjoy the low perspective in this capture, and the colors and processing look pretty good. The colors are very natural, and the the only nit is the bit of darkness along the bottom that others have mentioned. I see you have crop ideas from the top and the bottom, and put me in the camp where a slight crop form the bottom and top could work out well.
However, this image is a nice view as is Sandro, and nice to see you on NPN
Looking forward to more of your work.
Registered on February 20, 2007, 226 Posts, 4571 Comments
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10 commentsInteresting details in the moraine. If your editing software has the capability, you might attempt to bring up the detail in the dark area in the immediate foreground. Since the main subject is the moraine, the distant peaks and the sky, you might consider cropping this from the top. The color looks nice and natural.
We're looking forward to your participation at NPN!
--P
This looks like an interesting place Looks like a sweeping view of these mountains. I would try to lighten up the shadow area just a bit and bring out some detail as suggested. And darken down the sunlig area to give it more definition.
All the best,
Sandro
Chris
A pano comp might work well for this, just a thought.
Welcome Sandro
I'm passionate both with traditional (also with large format camera and plan films) and digital photography.
About 80/90% of my images are landscapes and natural close-up, my reference photographers are Ansel Adams, Edward Weston,
Vittorio Sella....
I'll upload my humble digital works here, but (it's not kindness) I enjoy myself more in writing about the other one's image.
Again not kindness, but I like much the general style (ok, each of us is unique and unique our images, but I see a certain good general taste) here and the criticism is not ever easy.for me. I hope that also my simple and sincere "clap hands" will be accepted.
All the best!
Sandro
All the best!
Sandro
I really enjoy the low perspective in this capture, and the colors and processing look pretty good. The colors are very natural, and the the only nit is the bit of darkness along the bottom that others have mentioned. I see you have crop ideas from the top and the bottom, and put me in the camp where a slight crop form the bottom and top could work out well.
However, this image is a nice view as is Sandro, and nice to see you on NPN
Looking forward to more of your work.