Wild Female Grizzly
by William Bickle
Wild Grizzly at waters edge in the Khutzeymateen .
Recently emerged from her witner dormancy and is feeding on sedge grasses to replenish her bodies requirements.
Nikon D700 with 200mm vr lens in normal mode, ISO 500 1/200
comments appreciated.
Bill
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PS.... many images of this adventure can be seen at my web.
Comments
11 commentsMax
Compositionally (whether during capture or in cropping) I think this is a solid and appealing shot. The dripping water adds to the appeal of the image and the reflection is a nice touch. The vertical crop works for me and - for my taste - the subject is placed well within the frame.
In terms of the post-processing...I think a few things done in post are hampering my appreciation of the image (and note to others - I WAS with Bill when he shot this image). The first is the saturation (mostly of the greens, but also the browns in the bear) - just too punchy for my taste (with the result being that this image doesn't at all match my recollection of the scene). And, I think you've pulled out too much shadow detail on the bear, particularly on the underside (below the head, under the body, etc.) - with the net result being contrast is just too low and the image has become much tonally flatter (but much more colourful) than the scene was. Of course, there's always personal preference involved during post-processing, so just take this as my 2 cents worth!!
Cheers...
Brad
A very small nit, but one I think would make this even stronger. I might be tempted to clean up some of the little white foam/bubbles on the water. I wouldn't worry about the stuff by the shore grass, but the foam going into the bear reflection and beyond. I know that is super minor and some people don't like to clone at all...so may not be your preference.
Khutzeymateen has to be visited to admire the amazing saturated colours! Grasses and trees are so vivid in their greens .
I think the pure and damp air feeds the foliage to produce constant fresh growth which can be seen as oversaturated .
Bill
My first impression, was from my notebook computer with very small screen, Looks Ok. But o a real large monitor I see where too much Saturation , especially greens!
Gotta remember this when posting from the Notebook.
Cheers
Bill
I like this a lot, the greens maybe a little overwhelming, but then I have just returned from Botswana where the same rich green occurs