backlight and mule deer
by Lon Sharp
Reworking an older file, I wanted to see how this flies with an audience. The light intrusion in some parts nags at me, but the overall color keeps me coming back. This is shooting almost directly into the light, with my hat providing additional shade in front of the lens. Cropped for vertical.
D3s, 1600 iso, 200-400 @400, 1/400, f10
Comments appreciated.
Comments
7 commentsWell, good to see it resurrected and lookin Fine!
Gotta love the very fine rim lighting!
The body of the deer was in shadow and can see where you worked on that area to give some colour and texture.
Cheers
Bill
I find this one very, very interesting. For awhile I was thinking that about the top 10% should be cropped off, but when I look at it again (and again) I think I'd leave it just as is. Overall really interesting use of lighting and colour with strong composition. I'm half wondering if the grassy zone immediately behind the buck (which more or less forms a triangle) could use just a tad more contrast? To my eye that section almost has that "too much shadow retrieval" look to it and I think a tad more contrast there would not only help the buck pop out, but it would look a bit more realistic? Just a thought...
Cheers...
Brad
I think you could add a vignette (or do some selective dodging and burning) to the bottom of the image to bring more attention to the buck, as is it looks like there was some flaring down there.