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by Ronald Murphy

Gallery: LandscapePosted August 17, 2014180 views12 comments
Seward Park, Seattle, WA

Raw file processed in LR5, with TK resize/sharpening for web. Canon T3i, 1/8 s, f/7.1, ISO 200, EF 24-105 mm @ 45 mm, CPL

Please view the large image!

Seeking any and all advice and comments. Thanks in advance.

Comments

12 comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on August 17, 2014 at 5:59 PM
I like the composition and the mood. It does feel a little dark to me. If you opened up the darks some, I think that would give this more punch. The color looks good.

--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on August 17, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Ronald, I clicked on the large version right away and really enjoyed the look and feel this has. In the small version it does feel a little darker but the large version works great as is for me. Very nicely done!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Daniel Finchum on August 17, 2014 at 8:28 PM
I think it looks good dark as is. Of course, that's me. Love the title and fits the scene very well. Nice job Ronald.
Registered on September 8, 2013, 43 Posts, 222 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on August 17, 2014 at 8:40 PM
the large version is a must see, Ronald. So many details and textures to savor and enjoy along with that exquisite light in the middle of the scene. Beautifully done.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Joseph Campisi on August 18, 2014 at 12:04 AM
I agree with Preston's suggestion Ron. Very cool image though. A bit busy, but it really captures the impossibly lush, green feel of our PNW forests. I especially like that dappled light on the trees in the center. I need to go back to Seward!
Registered on November 24, 2008, 304 Posts, 3211 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Richter on August 18, 2014 at 9:18 AM
This is a most amazing image to me, Ronald. I admire the way you frame it by the darker trunks and the foreground elements, while I concentrate on the delicate details in the depth.

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Cothran on August 18, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Notwithstanding, this is a chaotic mess! But how beautiful it all comes together. You really lucked out with the lighting, which is what makes the image so marvelous (doesn't it always?). Great capture on your part, and perfect composition. I would not change processing on this. It's the contrast between the darker foreground and brighter background that defines the image. The closer together you bring these two in processing, the less impact the image will have. Of course, you could also go too far in the other direction, but as is, I find it just right.
Registered on December 5, 2012, 31 Posts, 730 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on August 18, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Ronald, I just posted a comment on another deep forest scene and basically outlined my thoughts with these type of images. To me these are a very difficult scene to capture overall in pleasing compositions and in many cases too much chaos and or lighting conditions too severe.
With that all said this is a very nice capture. Even in this dark state comes across as a wonderful take. I do like the peering through or framing from the FG trees of the main subjects in the lighted area. Very nice work in a difficult place to come away with anything that works. This one surely does. :cool:
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Ronald Murphy on August 18, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Thanks to everyone for the comments; I appreciate them all. And thanks to those who responded to my earlier request for suggestions about visiting the Pacific Northwest. It's an amazing and diverse place.
Registered on March 13, 2012, 279 Posts, 975 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on August 19, 2014 at 1:02 AM
Dense image, but it works! The framing with the darker trees is just what's needed to organize this. I really like all the detail in the larger version.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Reid on August 22, 2014 at 4:11 PM
The large version looks just great Ronald. I like how you've created a window effect and the dark edges help focus into the centre. Very nice job on this.
Registered on January 27, 2013, 65 Posts, 2460 Comments
Comment posted by Daniel Rappaport on August 24, 2014 at 8:38 PM
Really nice balance and flow to this.
Registered on September 9, 2009, 294 Posts, 2006 Comments