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Monsoon Plume

by Tony Kuyper

Gallery: LandscapePosted July 25, 20143,639 views18 comments
After the comments on my last two posts I realized I probably was being a little timid with the skies. The recommendations were right. I darkened the skies in both and boosted contrast a bit and they look much better. Thanks.

I tried to apply some of what I learned here. Took the clouds darker and added more contrast than I normally would. This was an evening of rapidly changing conditions and there was a fearsomeness in both the clouds and the thunder and lightening. Despite the storm overhead, the sunset on the horizon was clear. So overall some nice conditions for clouds.

Recommendations are always useful and considered. No picture is finished until NPN has its say.

Canon 5D2, 28-300@28, f/16 1/6 sec ISO 100

Comments

18 comments
Comment posted by Joseph Campisi on July 26, 2014 at 12:04 AM
Really dramatic sky Tony! Love the varied shapes and colors.
Registered on November 24, 2008, 304 Posts, 3211 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Gavin on July 26, 2014 at 12:24 AM
Remarkably dramatic sky. I like it!
Registered on August 14, 2008, 293 Posts, 1250 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on July 26, 2014 at 2:58 AM
Strikingly beautiful Tony.

pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Metternich on July 26, 2014 at 3:48 AM
Pure art in the sky. Well captured! Nice job Tony.
Registered on June 19, 2009, 276 Posts, 6240 Comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on July 26, 2014 at 5:23 AM
Amazing sky to say the least, beautiful patterns with very nice detail. I especially like the composition and colors, works beautifully in my opinion. Excellent work Tony.
John
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on July 26, 2014 at 9:29 AM
This is very nice, Tony! That sky is awesome looking and I love the light and colors. :toast:

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Ken Henke on July 26, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Possibly one of the most dramatic and complex sky images I've ever seen. You must have been in total awe to see such a site! Excellent image :toast:
Registered on February 20, 2012, 117 Posts, 285 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on July 26, 2014 at 2:22 PM
Man! That's some great cloud action! Looks great. I would like to see just a bit more of the canyon wall, but other than that, I like this a lot.

--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Zack Clothier on July 26, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Beautiful skyscape Tony, if this were mine I might reduce the contrast in the lower half of the sky, just to many "sharp" edges there, other than that this looks great.
Registered on January 28, 2010, 343 Posts, 2257 Comments
Comment posted by Scott Fricke on July 26, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Stunning image Tony! The sky looks great, my only suggestion might be to back off the saturation of the canyon walls on the bottom a bit. Very nice comp as well, I bet it would look good printed large. :toast:
Registered on January 19, 2007, 133 Posts, 1448 Comments
Comment posted by gary phillips on July 26, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Very cool, Tony. Love the strip of ground to anchor this amazing sky. The only suggestion I would have is to dial back on the blues slightly on the right side. They look a little dreamy at least on the Ipad. Other than that........Killer!
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on July 26, 2014 at 5:01 PM
Tony: Marvelous result and a terrific capture of a wonderful scene. Awe inspiring indeed. >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on July 28, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Amazing tower of color and texture. Maybe a little more ground would help balance the sky portion. Appears to be a little bit of a halo at the transition of ground to cloud that caught my eye. Also, some of the shadow areas of the clouds - especially the magenta areas see a little grainy. Wouldn't have thought that would be the case with ISO 100 and a short shutter speed. Maybe the shadows were brought up a bit :confused: A serious cloud scape. We just don't get these type of conditions out east. Not sure how you handle the heat out west in the summer, but the storms look tremendous.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on July 28, 2014 at 9:36 AM
This is an awesome sky scape, Tony! The strip of canyon makes a fine anchor and it shows especially well in the larger version. I can immerse myself in the details in that cloud on the right for a long time. As a minor nit, I feel like the blues in the ul quarter are a bit too saturated.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Kathy Barnhart on July 29, 2014 at 6:47 PM
It can't get more dramatic than this! Just wonderful..you've captured quite a show and all its vividness and color bring it to the viewer.
Registered on November 11, 2011, 404 Posts, 1639 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on August 1, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Geez, Tony, I spend all day at work dealing with the 'plume' and you have to make me endure more on my time off?! C'mon, man. :cool:
OK, I have a lot of experience with clouds. I also have strong opinions about their photos, which means you can ignore my rant, but i'll rant regardless. One of my favorite storm photogs has been overdoing the contrast on his shots for months now, but if I said anything critical about his photos his legions of rabid fans would lynch me in effigy. Fortunately, you don't have a humongous FB/500px following, so I can be up front with you. :razz: I really love your expansive vertical comp. I might pull back the cyan (more to blue) a bit. The contrast is the tricky part. You need definition, but too much and it no longer looks like clouds. Study how the clouds look to your eye, that's the key IMO. Then, try to reproduce what you see. Some folks want to create a painting--but what painting can capture the grandeur of a sky like this? Might as well go for a photo, IMO. This is pretty close, just needs some slight tweaks. You'll get there, I'm confident of that. :wavey:
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by John Williams on August 12, 2014 at 9:24 PM
Amazing clouds! I can see where Stan is coming from on the contrast. For me, it does seem a tad heavy here. Something between this and the sky of the prior images would probably hit my sweet spot.
Registered on September 6, 2007, 221 Posts, 5985 Comments
Comment posted by Jon Daining on August 13, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Wow, incredible image Tony. The color palate reminds me of a Georia O'Keeffe painting.
Registered on February 25, 2012, 25 Posts, 191 Comments