Bryce River of Fog
by gary phillips
This was taken last September and I've been working on countless iterations trying to find something that speaks to what I know was a very special opportunity in an iconic place. It had been raining, heavily for three days and prior to sunrise the fog layer was on the move. I knew that I wanted to do a long exposure to set the fog in motion, but didn't quite know how to handle it. Anyway, this is what I came up with and I'd like to hear whatever advise/comments you guys can throw my way. Thanks in advance for your help.
5d2, iso 800, 100mm, f/14, 30s
large is probably better
Comments
13 commentsJohn
If I was a lay person, you could almost convince me that a dam had burst back there somewhere
Excellent processing, very well conceived
pat
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
I've looked at this a couple of times now and like it a lot. I think it might have more impact though if you cropped some of the sky out and went to pano. It would put more emphasis on the fog - maybe too much though.
pat
A scene not often seen at Bryce I am sure.
Beautiful look to the fog.
I think the lighting could be brought up a bit in the FG layers...
I agree with the comments about the crop. The interest in the image is the fog and the formations, but the sky is given a lot of real estate. I can see that a pano or tighter crop come with it's own challenges, and maybe you've tinkered with it, but that's where I'd head with this. Hard to give anything up here, but losing ~20%, equally on the right and top dimensions, may reduce the sky and bring a little more focus to the most interesting portions of the image.
I also think the processing on the formations can be reworked. To my eye, that area is a little dark and as such held back from joining the "narrative" of this image.