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Finally Spring
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Finally Spring

by Stephanie Jenkins

Gallery: AvianPosted April 12, 201446 views4 comments
Late afternoon, hand held (was just out for a ride with no tripod on board), small swamp local to my house in upstate New York. Sony a57 with Sony 75-300 lens
300mm
1/500
f5.6
ISO 200
WB auto
Exp auto

Comments

4 comments
Comment posted by John Tobias on April 12, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Welcome to NPN. your exposure is OK, but I think your photo will have more impact if the goose was not centered. I suggest cropping off from the bottom and if there is room, from the left side as well. You could also try a vertical composition to keep the reflection. Thanks for sharing.
Registered on September 12, 2009, 2120 Posts, 6455 Comments
Comment posted by Rick Cloran on April 12, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Stephanie, A very reasonable effort. Your exposure is a bit hot (over) and you can see this in the loss of detail in the cheek and at the white portion of the tail. This is likely due to using auto for the exposure without having set some negative compensation because it will have been influenced by what was likely dark water. The other thing to watch is the point of focus, which looks to be the shoulder area on the goose. Where it was angled toward you the head is now at the limits of your depth of field and so is a little soft. You are on the right track.
Registered on April 6, 2004, 119 Posts, 1989 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on April 12, 2014 at 11:23 PM
Welcome, Stephanie. John and Rick have given you some excellent advice. My only addition to that is that you said this was taken in the late afternoon, which shows in the image. It's extremely difficult to get a good exposure of a high contrast subject like this in bright sun. Rules are made to be broken but high contrast and highly saturated subjects like many flowers do best on overcast days or in early morning or late evening soft light. This is a creditable effort and as Rick noted, you're on the right track. Keep them coming.

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Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Stephanie Jenkins on April 13, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Thank you for the comments! Very useful to someone as new to this type of photography as I am. I played around with processing (something I am also new to) and composition and did get some better results. As to the late afternoon light, I was back there (with tripod) yesterday morning in a filtered sunlight and took some more shots of the geese, but also got an opportunity to shoot 2 eagles flying low over the swamp. Being an amateur as I said and relying on my camera's auto setting I stretched the ability of my zoom referenced above so no shots worthy of critiquing here, but exciting nonetheless. Thanks again. :smile:
Registered on March 8, 2014, 8 Posts, 9 Comments