How Small We Are
by Youssef Ismail
Thanks for the comments on my last photo. Reciprocity is a real problem for us film photographers. It was a big gamble, but I wanted to play. Further Fuji Provia shifts to magenta in ling exposures past two minutes so it needs green filtering as compensation, that is probably what caused the extreme red/magenta glow in the trees. I had to correct for it in scanning pretty heavily.
Anyway the next morning I woke up late, at least in photographer terms, I awoke as the sun was rising. It was still okay as in the Valley you still have about an hour or so before the sun hits the ground. I was hoping to catch more tooley fog in the meadows but my late start got the best of me. My first stop was at Leidig Meadow from the Northside Drive. I stayed up on the road embankment to try and photograph down into whatever fog did remain. There was not much. I again made two exposures here with the camera back shifted once right and once left and then stitched the two sheets together in PS.
As I was setting up, William Neil and his workshop group stopped there and went out into the meadow but moved west and did not get into my framing. Don't know if that was no purpose or not, but it was appreciated. He said hello as he passed and asked where Lon was. I told him he had already left and then William vanished among the trees.
Your thoughts and honest feedback on this panorama of the meadow is much appreciated. I only have one more photo to share from the Yosemite trip after this one.
4x5, Nikkor 150mm, f22, 1 sec, 81EF warming filter, Fuji Provia 100F.
Comments
19 commentsNick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
I think this is fabulous! Exposure, color and composition are right on. I do have one suggestion, though. The lighter-tone tree trunk nar the right side is a bit of an eye grabber--a small burn would fix this.
I'd like to make a small correction regarding the geology in Youssef's image. The structure referred to above as an alluvial fan is actually a talus field. They are formed when fractured rock falls from the walls above. Alluvial fans are detrital material that is brought downslope due to the action of running water and usually show evidence of water channels.
Youssef, I think the amount of Thule fog is perfect for this image; just enough to add a nice accent, but not so much as to obscure the wonderful textures and color.
Well done!
--P
Gary.
I could have sworn I left you comment - must have only been in my mind though.
Wonderful pano of Leidig meadow! Great color and that thin layer of fog really adds. A great spot for the pano format - I've got a similar one from a couple winters ago. The white trunk on the right is mildly distracting; perhaps if you print this you might address it, maybe just burning down a little bit would be enough. The only other suggestion I have would be to use TK's Darks Triple Play with some masking to bring up the darker values on both the right and left. The light fall off and balance between the center and edges is a little off to my eye; almost like a wide angle lens that needs a center filter. Anyway, just wanted to mention it. It might not be an issue for you at all.
Wonderful image.
Lon
- Dan