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Yosemite Moments #16
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Yosemite Moments #16

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 16, 2012332 views20 comments
Thanks so much for the comments and response to my last image. I've concluded that since comments and suggestions ranged on both sides - warm/cool on the granite, too much sat/not enough, dark/light, etc. that the image must be just right in the middle and I probably won't fuss much with it now. Thanks for the feedback!

From one of my favorites to one of my least favorites. But I told myself I was going to show the whole series, and this is next in line. Still on day three of our fall trip to Yosemite with Kyle K., Preston, Youssef and Chris, we spent quite a bit of time at this location just east of the Pahono Bridge and directly across from Fern Spring. As we've mentioned the Merced was very low this fall, allowing us to walk to parts of the river not ever having been able to do before. While others were shooting upstream at a large reflecting pool and fall color, Preston and I wandered downstream and we were both attracted by the gray rocks with the water lines and I was attracted to the reflection as well. This is cropped from the original; the top was just a little busy and untidy for me.

Any thoughts or suggestions on color, saturation, whatever - greatly appreciated!

Chamonix 4x5, Nikkor 300mm, V100f, f/45 @15s

Thanks!
Lon

Comments

20 comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on December 16, 2012 at 4:25 PM
Funny, this one of my favorites from your trip. That foreground is fabulous, with great light, reflections and hints of the bottom. There is just enough background to ground the image, too. Love this one. Even if you don't. :biggrin:
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Justin Richardson on December 16, 2012 at 4:46 PM
You say this is your least favorite? I guess we can be our own worst critics sometimes, huh? :wink:
I think this is absolutely amazing Lon. Processing looks spot on to me..i love the array of reflected colors in the water, from light to dark, with the rock color flowing in the water completely setting this off..it has me downright mesmerized. And as Harley mentioned, there is enough at the top to keep me intrigued and wanting to explore further. Great!!
Registered on November 18, 2012, 28 Posts, 134 Comments
Comment posted by Matthew Goldsmith on December 16, 2012 at 5:24 PM
I'm going with Harley and Justin on this one Lon...probably one of my favorites. It's the coolness of the rocks juxtaposed against the warm reflection that's doing it for me.
Registered on June 29, 2010, 37 Posts, 286 Comments
Comment posted by Natalie Mikaels on December 16, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Lon: I love this one. The reflection really makes the image pop. I'm trying to think of a suggestion for improvement, but nothing is coming to mind. :wink: I might be curious to see this image with the rocks a bit warmer...but on the other hand, I like the color contrast between the cool rocks and the warm reflections in the water. Great job as always.
Registered on November 3, 2011, 45 Posts, 181 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on December 16, 2012 at 6:14 PM
I'm really liking the composition here, Lon. At first glance and a few more looks I thought about cloning out the FG underwater rocks, however, I think then the water becomes too much of a stretch to the BG area. If this makes any sense. Leaving those there keeps the balance a bit more to me and makes the water a good portion of the interest with the reflections and such also. Just my thoughts on that aspect anyway.
The sat and contrast looks good to me. Color wise its hard for me to see any issues without rocking the Color Balance sliders around. The BG looks a tiny bit of blue/cyan, but in the shade it would lean that way. So, all that stuff gets into preference or overall likes if you will. Regardless, it sure looks darn good and natural to me for what it's worth..... :smile:
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on December 16, 2012 at 6:27 PM
This is very interesting Lon, and I do like it. Your comp works great and the colors look perfect to me. I think the reflection is wonderful. A very peaceful feeling image! I guess it might not be a favorite from your recent post for me, but I still think it is a beautiful image. This still has your signature of excellence!... :smile:

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on December 16, 2012 at 7:10 PM
Sweet colours throughout- I love how the yellows and greens on the bank are echoed perfectly in the water.
I think this is a delightful image.
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Cothran on December 16, 2012 at 8:16 PM
This appeals to me. I'm not quite sure why. Maybe it's the vertical reflections in the water. Nonetheless, it's a very peaceful image, and I love the bluish hint in the rocks.
Registered on December 5, 2012, 31 Posts, 730 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Pelton on December 16, 2012 at 8:35 PM
This is kind of thought provoking, Lon. I really like the dark shapes in the reflection and I also like the light streaks. Well seen.
Registered on November 25, 2003, 380 Posts, 4647 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Palmieri on December 16, 2012 at 8:39 PM
I'm loving this one. The reflections and colors in the FG are gorgeous and I think the grey rocks along the bank just add a lot of interest. Beautiful!
Registered on September 1, 2011, 35 Posts, 748 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on December 16, 2012 at 10:36 PM
Your best photo of all time, Lon!
OK, im kidding....but i like this much more than you do, it's got some great layers and thirds are very strong here. I like the reflections too.
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on December 16, 2012 at 11:12 PM
The more I look at this one, the more I like it, Lon. All the elements tie together nicely, and I really like the reflection.

I had fun here, too! :smile:

Well done, sir.

--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on December 16, 2012 at 11:59 PM
I think I like this best from your most recent images Lon. Very different than your elegant tree images but very elegant all the same in its own right. Beautiful muted reflections and lines in the water.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on December 17, 2012 at 6:55 AM
Pretty scene, and I really like the quiet mood and reflections, I also like the bit of water motion you captured [ bubble trails ] In my opinion this is very nice, and very pleasant to view. Beautifully seen and presented Lon.
John
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on December 17, 2012 at 11:47 AM
I really like the cool palette of this one as well as the sense of movement in the water. And, I see why the reflection called to you for this shot. The glow of light from it on the water adds that final touch. A beautiful quiet image.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on December 17, 2012 at 2:37 PM
Lon, I have aalready lookd at it several times and every time i like it more. I really like this. Sure, it's not my favorite of yours but still a very strong image. I love the layers here and the light. Also the reflections is great.
Registered on January 29, 2010, 285 Posts, 4281 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on December 17, 2012 at 11:59 PM
love the glassy surface of the water. Colors and light are nice too. This is a beautiful image and one of my favorites so far from your trip. Not sure why you aren't fond of this one, I'd be proud to have it in my portfolio.
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Joseph Campisi on December 18, 2012 at 12:03 AM
It's not my favorite image of your recent series either Lon. That being said, I still like it a lot. Those beautiful reflections on that smooth water are what make this shot for me!
Registered on November 24, 2008, 304 Posts, 3211 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on December 18, 2012 at 1:26 AM
Wow, Lon, this looks great. You surprised me with this one! As Harley said, the fg is fabulous, and the upper part looks just great too. Overall, a fantastic pano. And this is the least favorite of your favourite? :confused:
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments
Comment posted by Anil Rao on December 19, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Enjoying this one very much - both as a realistic image and an abstract.
Registered on November 15, 2003, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments