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Yosemite Moments #13
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Yosemite Moments #13

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 10, 2012295 views17 comments
Thanks for your very helpful comments and critique on my last post. It's so great to get the feedback to help tweak an image or to learn things that sometimes we just don't see after working on an image for so long - can't see the forest for the trees as they say. :smile:

This one is a bit different - tree AND grass! I call this one the Little Charlie Brown tree. The first image of Day 3, again El Capitan Meadow. I was actually wandering around aimlessly for a while in this meadow, nothing was coming to me, I wasn't seeing anything. Preston had found a comp and was working this scene(I hope he doesn't mind.) Kyle was nearby looking too and Youssef was about half the meadow away to the west where he found his current postings. Anyway, I linked to Preston's image to give you some context for this one. I believe my little tree here is just off to the right of Preston's image at the very edge of this stand of what I believe are Yellow Willow, with one tall cottonwood.

This image is actually a 2-image stack for depth of field, or lack of depth, selective focus. One image was at f/22.5, the other image at f/11. f/11 is almost wide open with the LF lens and provided the soft grass I wanted to make the tree stand out. But I got a sharper image of the leaves and branches of the tree at f/22. So, I stacked the two and made the sharper leaves stand out against the softer, shallower depth of field image. But actually, the two slides side by side aren't all that different. The bigger difference really is that this particular lens is much sharper at f/22 and quality drops off - as with most all lenses when at the extreme apertures.

Aside from the technical challenge of blending/stacking two pieces of film, I liked the image of the lonely little tree against the sea of meadow grasses with just a few leaves of autumn. Would love to hear your thoughts and critiques.

Chamonix 4x5, Nikkor 300mm, V100f, f/22@1s, f/11@1/4s

Thanks!
Lon

Comments

17 comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on December 10, 2012 at 3:11 PM
I don't know Lon, but this photo has such a powerful effect on me right now. I connect with it - almost like I was that sad little tree just out there all alone. It also brings a sense of fortitude and courage, this little tree all alone and its doing it. It's a powerful photo.

I love the soft light and the accompanying softness of the grass. They go well together. It really makes the tree stand out. I like your way of thinking - using stacked images for anti-DOF.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 10, 2012 at 3:29 PM
Thanks Youssef! I thought I would respond now because you've raised a very, very interesting topic I think. I would encourage you and others to view Preston's image linked above in my comments. What you see is an entire community of trees - a large organism, like aspen where I believe all these trees are genetically linked. So in reality, this little tree isn't so lonesome, is it? But yet, the power of the photograph can selectively tell a story - even lie, as many people might portend to believe. By selectively isolating this tree, I can see the impact this might have on you or anyone who wasn't standing there at the time in portraying a powerful loneliness or even courage, survival. Yet, I had the knowledge that just a foot or so away is this little tree's sister or brother and the entire stand of willow - yet you have no way of knowing that. An interesting quandry isn't it?
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Jared Warren on December 10, 2012 at 3:43 PM
I think this is very elegant. The sharpness and color in the leaves is a nice contrast to the soft grass. I also appreciated the Charlie Brown reference, having watched that last night with my kids. :smile:
Registered on May 11, 2012, 84 Posts, 931 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on December 10, 2012 at 3:50 PM
Charlie Brown tree indeed! I like the few remaining leaves of the tree and the way the grass complements the color. I might crop a wee bit off the top though to remove the darker areas up there.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on December 10, 2012 at 5:15 PM
I have looked at this one several times. While I am a fan of the limited DOF image, for some reason this one is not resonating with me. I can't really say why. Pondering continues.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on December 10, 2012 at 5:47 PM
A beautifully understated and artistic piece, Lon. Simple to the point of almost being a Zen feeling. The wash of color and texture behind compliments the little tree perfectly. The blend works very well with the shallow dof added in.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Greenwood on December 10, 2012 at 7:49 PM
I really like this one. Before reading your explanation, I thought that you simply applied a blur filter in PS to the grass in the foreground to achieve the effect. But knowing that you had the vision and foresight to capture two separate images with the intent to create this composition, somehow makes it all the more appealing. Nice work!
Registered on November 9, 2003, 229 Posts, 1523 Comments
Comment posted by Justin Richardson on December 10, 2012 at 8:12 PM
This is NICE Lon...i love the simplicity here yet the powerful statement this lonely sapling provides. Very nicely done!!! :toast:
Registered on November 18, 2012, 28 Posts, 134 Comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on December 11, 2012 at 4:31 AM
If I did not know better, I would of though you were in the Pine Bush, I'm kind of with Harley on this, I dont think you can quickly view this scene and make a comment, it has to be studied in order to be appreciated, the soft grasses through me, but as I sat back and stared into the scene, the soft grasses became a blush of color, and the whole scene came together beautifully, I think your intent shows through. Definitely like it Lon, but it took a while before I really seen it. PS, I'm really not good at at this, hope you understand what I am trying to say.
John
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on December 11, 2012 at 9:46 AM
Lon, I have looked at this several times now and I'm really enjoying what you did here. I kind of liked it at first but it needed to grow on me a bit, and now I very much enjoy it! I like what you did with the 2 images to get the effect you were after...and it worked. This picture is all about feeling for me and I like the Charlie Brown tree thought... :smile:

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Todd Liotine on December 11, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Lon, I appreciate the image and the effort and it is of course well executed. I'm thinking in the context of hanging on a wall and for me this image doesn't hold up on it's own (possibly because your body of work is so strong). In my mind, for example if there was just one yellow leaf it would be powerful.
Registered on July 1, 2008, 131 Posts, 671 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on December 11, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Hi Lon, well what can I say, there is the grass and there is a tree - so I am supposed to like it, but I have to be honest, initially I could not relate to it so well. Then I thought that cropping from the top to eliminate the (for me) distracting elements at the upper border would bring out the essence of the scene better. The little tree has a nice elegance and humbleness to it which I really like and which is nicely emphasised by the soft bg. And now, after considering all these things, I am staring to really appreciate the image as it is. It is by no means a weaker image than the others, and perhaps even special, but also a bit "silent", easily overheard.
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Richter on December 11, 2012 at 2:37 PM
An impressive visualization of fragility to me, Lon. I always admire the will to live in nature.

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on December 12, 2012 at 1:25 AM
I really like the abstract qualities you have captured here Lon. It is all about that little tree to me. The more I look at this, the more I like it.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Anil Rao on December 12, 2012 at 1:44 AM
Very nicely done, Lon. I am thoroughly enjoying this tiny slice of beauty and grace that you have captured here.
Registered on November 15, 2003, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on December 12, 2012 at 11:23 AM
:cool: Me likes.....
I will say all the many tree shots you've posted here at NP this little guy needs some meat on his bones, or is that bark on his trunk. :razz:
Such a tiny sapling and a great little subject to isolate out in this open meadow.
Overall, I think the idea you've used here with the blend, (something I read about recently :biggrin: ), stack, and DOF work makes for a perfect outline on the main subject.
I will bet this would make a surprisingly nice print also looking at the larger version here. Once again, the thumbnails seem to barely give us an idea of what to expect.
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Jimmy Gekas on December 12, 2012 at 12:15 PM
I like the DOF here quite a bit, Lon...really singles out the leaves on this little guy. While not as powerful as your other amazing tree images from Yosemite, it does have a place in your gallery. I think it works well with all of your others in telling a story of sorts, but not that strong on its own. Maybe I am completely off base with that last comment, as I look at again and it keeps growing on me. :toast:
Registered on July 26, 2007, 244 Posts, 2807 Comments