Green in the Gray
by Vance Gese
Found this yarrow plant this past September, growing in a huge driftwood log stranded at the back of a beach at Brown Point along the coast of Olympic NP. Thought the contrast of the touch of green amongst all the gray was quite nice and meaningful, and something of a gift in a year pretty much devoid of image making. Would appreciate any thoughts and suggestions you may have.
4x5, 120mm macro, Provia 100F. Tony Kuyper's masking techniques and others.
Large image attached as well.
Thanks.
Comments
18 commentsJohn
Peter
So while all of that is wonderful about it, including the off-center sort of rule-of-thirds placement of the subject plant, the one suggestion I would make would be to decrease the saturation in the leaves of that plant. The current level, at least on my monitor which is not calibrated, approaches being almost garish. And I think that is exactly the right adjective.
I think the subtle meaning of your composition would work so much better if the green were muted in the subject, even though you are playing that against an essentially B&W background. It can be toned way down it it will work so much better, IMO.
Sometimes less is more.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Chris