Coast Crevice

Gallery: LandscapePosted September 17, 2012219 views10 comments

Nothing like the previous too photos on NPN....Lon's and Dean's. Just needed to get some critique on this one before I take off for autumn aspen overload.

Nikon d800, 85 1.4, 3 shot blend for focus

Comments

10 comments

Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on September 17, 2012 at 12:10 PM

Love these intimate little scenes. Great texture. Composition is seductively simple. Nice work

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Comment posted by Peter Richter on September 17, 2012 at 12:41 PM

An appealing intimate abstract for me, Jimmy. I enjoy the interesting and nice interplay of colors, shapes and textures.

Peter

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Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on September 17, 2012 at 2:00 PM

Beautifully designed Jimmy. That line running through just works perfectly, as well as color contrast and the other little features like the rock texture and the pieces in the water. Have fun in the aspens!

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Comment posted by Bill Chambers on September 17, 2012 at 3:10 PM

Very graceful and eloquent Jimmy. Love the comp, but especially love the subdued coloration and texture.

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Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on September 17, 2012 at 3:28 PM

Nice curves and chips to the granite. I might be inclined to brighten the crevice some. Have a good trip to CO

Registered on April 1, 2010, 196 Posts, 1592 Comments

Comment posted by Stan Rose on September 17, 2012 at 3:33 PM

The bottom/crevice is too murky. Boost the heck out of the contrast here, so it's all about the pattern (cause it's all about the pattern

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Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments

Comment posted by Harley Goldman on September 17, 2012 at 6:28 PM

Very cool, Jimmy. Great shapes with contrasting warm and cool tones.

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Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on September 17, 2012 at 6:43 PM

Love it, Jimmy! Perfect curve, and beautiful contrasts with the blue reflection and warm rock. The kelp (I think?) bits keep it real, and give some scale and clues to where you found this, all of which add a lot of depth to the image overall.

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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on September 18, 2012 at 3:02 AM

Hey Jimmy, don't cut yourself short, this is excellent! I really like the design and the soft, graceful curves and forms. I would change a thing. Well seen, excellent processing too.

Hey, happy autumn hunting. Try not to roll your suv this time.