Dogwood and ... +alt
by Lon Overacker
No faces or clever titles this time.
Different tree, but same time and area as my first dogwood image I posted recently. Not sure about this one, but I guess there's enough I liked about it to take the time to scan and process it, so I might as well share it. There's also a vertical option, both cut from the same vertical original.
I know there are like three out of sight blossoms here, so it can't be about them, so are they a distraction? Or is the glow and color of the river and the tree structure enough to carry the image? Your thoughts and critique are welcome!
4x5, 300mm, V50, f/32 @ 11s.
Thanks!
Lon
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33 commentsOk, i like this, maybe not quite as strong as the simpler ones but pretty cool i think. Vertical or horizontal, the one thing i would do is crop so that angular branch is gone-- a bit distracting. Real interesting otherwise.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
I think I'm favoring the horizontal as well, but what's the best compromise between the two? How about square? I also wondered if that heavy crock of a branch would get mentioned. I think it's better without it now too.
So here's a cropped version. This may become my final version that makes the website, but the jury is still out.
Full disclosure - I cloned out one of the dogwood blossoms in the URC after the crop. Just seemed misplaced in the extreme corner. Also, there is a 10% opacity Orton layer on this too. I had a couple versions going so I don't remember if the first two were Ortonized or not - but probably.
Thanks! I appreciate the assist and feedback.
Lon
Just love how you visit this grand landscape and find it possible to concentrate on such intimate scenes.
Perfect .... all three Images are outstanding in colours and graphics .... very well done
Helmut
Regarding the crop, the last version (without the angular branch) works best for me. Maybe an illusion, but my impression is that the glow is more intense in the first (square) version than in the two others?
Peter
Beautiful intimate work as always! I prefer the flow of the horizontal version the most. I really love the way you found balance in every corner of the image and the soft gold water reflections in the background really pull the intricacy of the foreground into relief. This is masterfully artistic. I love it.
Gary.