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Reflect for a .. +alternate

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted June 13, 2012328 views19 comments
Thanks for the feedback and comments on my last post.

Here's yet another from Yosemite in May (I may be posting for a while, at least until I run out...)

Reflections like this are kinda like clouds. We all love them, photograph them and I don't know about you, but can be mesmerized by them. Nothing original here, but I'm always on the look out for a good one; color, texture and balance all come in the play here. I do struggle with presentation though - do I present normally as seen with the river as viewed and upside down reflection, or do you flip these vertically? I'm just going to display this one as captured and you can let me know what you think. There is also the option of including or cropping out the reality of the shoreline. Here, I kinda liked the grass and light.

Would love to hear your thoughts on any aspect of this image.

4x5, Nikkor 300mm, Velvia 100f, f/45 @2s

Thanks!
Lon

Comments

19 comments
Comment posted by Cam Held on June 13, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Lon,
I really like it as is, I think they just get confusing when they get flipped haha. Colors and textures look good, and I like the grass at the top. Nice work!
-Cam
Registered on November 12, 2009, 59 Posts, 398 Comments
Comment posted by Chad Merrell on June 13, 2012 at 7:40 PM
Very nice. As displayed I would leave the bank to anchor it a little but if you flip it I would crop it out and let it go with that mystical feeling.
Registered on July 8, 2010, 91 Posts, 304 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on June 13, 2012 at 8:37 PM
Gorgeous light and reflection Lon! I think you just inspired me for my next post from Scotland. I love the abstract qualities of light and might be tempted to loose the upper grass "realistic" portion. .... but that is me. It does work as a good anchor but tends to complicate the dreamy look.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on June 13, 2012 at 8:42 PM
I like the orientation as is. The brightness looks real, except that we've become so accustomed to lightened reflections that this looks dark. Lighter grass on upper edge is useful I think in creating the proper lightness context.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on June 13, 2012 at 9:51 PM
Lon,I very much like this as is. The bank and grass across the top works great with the light it has. I don't think this image would work nearly as well without it. The reflection and textured water looks wonderful.

Nick Bristol
Lone rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on June 13, 2012 at 10:31 PM
This is truly beautiful, Lon. The lines of the dark tree trunks and the wonderful palette of color in the reflection really makes this a joy to view. The detail in the surface of the water I find quite amazing; another layer of design to a superb composition. I prefer your image as presented (not a real fan of the 'flipped' reflection anyway) and with the far bank grounding the image. A real stunning image in my opinion.
Was curious if you tilted the lens to place the plane of sharp focus on the river surface or somewhere in between? The surface details are just so remarkable that I was wondering, given the small aperture used. Thanks.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on June 13, 2012 at 10:49 PM
I really like the reflection, but the far shore is not really working for me. I would prefer it cropped, making it more of a reflection abstract.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on June 14, 2012 at 9:42 AM
Lon - I prefer this orientation. The reflection is quite beautiful and I can see whey you were attracted towards. Part of me want just the reflection, the other part does like the slice of reality at the top. If including the shore line, I might be tempted to include more of it. I think it could help balance the image more. Though, not know what is above, maybe this would not be a good option. Looks like it would have been some of the trees.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on June 14, 2012 at 10:28 AM
Beautiful reflections. I like the strip of land at the top for establishing context although as you indicate it's not always the right answer. For this shot, I think the blue corners add a lot to the composition. Yes, you could also crop the shore (and maybe even the clear reflections) and rotate for another lovely take on the scene. That's what artistic license is all about. :smile:
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on June 14, 2012 at 7:52 PM
Thanks for the comments so far folks. I appreciate it.

Vance, great question and thanks for asking. Yes, I used tilt to get the surface of the water in sharp focus. Come to think of it, not sure why I went small at f/45 considering the water blurred the trees and background(El Capitan) and so therefore depth wasn't going to buy me anything. Still boggles me though about reflections and focus, considering the distance to the subject is the real distance, not what you see being reflected. Anyway.... I'm also surprised the texture and detail on the water's surface at 2 seconds.

Just for comparision, here is a flipped, flopped and cropped version. Certainly makes this more abstract. Perhaps I have two images out of this one. I also cropped just the grass, but the more clear reflections still grounded it in reality and thought they were distracting, so I cropped a little more.

To each our own I guess - but any preference?

Thanks!
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on June 14, 2012 at 9:39 PM
Lon,

The thumbnail caught my eye immediately. I really like the reflection itself and not the sharp grass so much. however I am not so sure about the repost. I understand the crop choice you mad, I think I would have made the same choice, but in it, something is lost even if I did not like it. It is still eye catching and differing from other blurs / reflections, this one imparts a sense of mystery without looking contrived or intentional - if that makes any sense.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on June 14, 2012 at 10:02 PM
Hey Lon, thanks for the info on your use of tilt. Can be a real challenge with these reflections, especially when the reflection is sharp, at least for me.
I appreciate your repost, and could see working with contrast and sats to really abstract the abstract, but still prefer the original which I think is gorgeous.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Kathy Barnhart on June 14, 2012 at 10:57 PM
This is gorgeous and interesting to me. I like seeing a little of the river's edge...it anchors the otherwise liquid feel of the image.
Love the dark tree trunks and impressionistic feel of this. I wouldn't have known it was Yosemite if you hadn't said so, but that makes it even better!
Registered on November 11, 2011, 404 Posts, 1639 Comments
Comment posted by Dean Sauskojus on June 15, 2012 at 2:07 AM
I think if you cropped the shoreline you would have to take out to much at the base of the trees in the reflection. Looks great as is Lon. Great job!
Registered on September 29, 2009, 137 Posts, 2659 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on June 16, 2012 at 11:49 PM
Exceptional! I love the nuances of movement in the water and all the color. The strip of land is nice as a reference point. But considering the abstract nature of the reflection scene, the land isn't necessarily necessary… Just a suggestion. Narrowing the strip by about half seems to help the abstraction, though. Just thinking out loud, Lon, because this is really amazing just as it is.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Anil Rao on June 18, 2012 at 2:31 AM
This is simply delightful, Lon. The reflection tells the story so well and I love the inclusion of the tiny strip of land at the top.
Registered on November 15, 2003, 234 Posts, 4923 Comments
Comment posted by David Edwards on June 18, 2012 at 3:15 AM
I love these types of shots and this is a beauty Lon. I like the strong shape of the tree trunks, and the small amount of land at the top of the images tethers me to reality. I like that a lot about the image. I think the little rock in the stream breaks the reflection a bit, but that's a minor nit. Wonderful shot. I like the complete abstract as well, but prefer your original.
Registered on December 6, 2008, 142 Posts, 2623 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Wolfe on June 23, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Registered on April 7, 2012, 42 Posts, 103 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Wolfe on June 23, 2012 at 8:44 PM
I love the softness in the reflection of the water. Beautiful reflection
Registered on April 7, 2012, 42 Posts, 103 Comments