Mono blaze
by Peter Coskun
Here is another image of that incredible sunset over mono lake. I'll probably post one more in a few days before showing the other great places I visited, but this will do for now. Saw some epic colors this evening. Comments and critiques appreciated.
Canon 7d
Canon 17-40mm @17mm
ISO 100
f22
2 sec
3 stop/2 stop grad ND filters
Tripod.
Comments
26 commentsLooks like you had some nice conditions for your trip and this is a great Mono shot. I could see a slight crop off the bottom, but still a great image with Pirate Ship Tufa in the background. I was in Mammoth with my son over the weekend for some late season skiing, but didn't get out with the camera. Hope to see some more shots from your trip.
One nit I have is with the foreground rock, I know the light probably wasn't the same on it, but it just seems way less saturated and a lot cooler than the rest of the scene - since it's brighter, it distracts me a bit, as I want to be led through the image to the tufas in the distance. Another option would be a 4:5 or 3:4 crop from the top down, cropping off the bottom of the image, if you didn't want to do any color/brightness manipulations on the FG.
I will also agree with Mark that the top of the upper-left tufa has more darkening than I'd like. In addition, it seems it has a little halo effect going on - not sure if this is because it's darker, or from sharpening, or from a mask that's slightly off..
Overall I love it, very moody, and I love the shape/arrangement of the rocks leading through the image in your composition. Having only seen a few of your images, I'm already able to recognize this from the thumbnail as one of yours via the color handling and composition!
EDIT: Looks like you already posted some revised versions, and others had already posted similar thoughts to mine. Sorry for not reading all the comments before posting.. I would say on your latest revision that I'd still like to see the fg rock darker, although since you say it's natural, maybe you'd prefer to try my crop suggestion. And the halo issue doesn't seem as prevalent anymore on the upper-left tufa, but still seems to be present..
Repost is even better.