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Mono blaze
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Mono blaze

by Peter Coskun

Gallery: LandscapePosted May 29, 2012483 views26 comments
Here is another image of that incredible sunset over mono lake. I'll probably post one more in a few days before showing the other great places I visited, but this will do for now. Saw some epic colors this evening. Comments and critiques appreciated.

Canon 7d
Canon 17-40mm @17mm
ISO 100
f22
2 sec
3 stop/2 stop grad ND filters
Tripod.

Comments

26 comments
Comment posted by Verdon on May 29, 2012 at 8:21 PM
vibrant, would be nice to see larger version, love the composition!! :toast:
Registered on June 10, 2011, 147 Posts, 1444 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Windom on May 29, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Wow! Fantastic color.....love the comp as well. The very top of the tall FG tufa could be lightened slightly.... probable grad effect...but that's a very minor point. :toast:
Registered on November 1, 2003, 176 Posts, 2302 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on May 29, 2012 at 8:49 PM
Love the wash of warm light and the glow it gives the entire image. Wonderful capture top to bottom
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Leo Collazo on May 29, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Great image. Beautiful light on the ski and cast on the terrain's surface. Very well done!
Registered on August 4, 2011, 19 Posts, 69 Comments
Comment posted by Kory Lidstrom on May 29, 2012 at 9:17 PM
Sweet light and beautiful colors. I might chop off the bottom 20% or so because I think it takes away from the delicious meat above.
Registered on November 19, 2008, 49 Posts, 1035 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on May 29, 2012 at 10:21 PM
Wow, what a shot. I do agree with Kory on the crop. The top 2/3 of this image with the light on the rocks and that incredible sky is simply amazing. Kudos. :toast:
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on May 29, 2012 at 10:52 PM
Thanks everyone! I'll try to get a cropped version up soon.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on May 29, 2012 at 11:21 PM
Fantastic light and color. The glow on the rocks is gorgeous.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on May 29, 2012 at 11:28 PM
I like this one much better than the first Peter. The light on the rocks makes this sing. Congratulations.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Enrique Vizcarra on May 30, 2012 at 12:18 AM
:toast: :toast:
Registered on September 10, 2009, 223 Posts, 393 Comments
Comment posted by Nicolaus Wegner on May 30, 2012 at 12:23 AM
Incredible indeed. Awesome shot Peter.
Registered on February 21, 2010, 133 Posts, 1509 Comments
Comment posted by David Edwards on May 30, 2012 at 1:28 AM
I like your comp here Peter. The reds are full-on but work well to punch up the drama. I would burn down the lighter fg rocks a bit for balance or a small crop. Nice shot!
Registered on December 6, 2008, 142 Posts, 2623 Comments
Comment posted by Carey Closs on May 30, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Nice composition Peter. Love the rich colors and the scene looks very other wordly, like something right out a science fiction movie (Martian landscape perhaps). I agree with David's suggestion of burning the foreground a little more. It appears to me a bit on the pinkish side and clashes with the rest of the scene a little.
Registered on April 15, 2012, 107 Posts, 326 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on May 30, 2012 at 10:37 AM
Peter, I like this more than the other you posted- brighter, nice sweep of tufas, and the orange reflection. Real nice image! Considerations might be to lighten the top of the left tufa caught by the grad and a slight crop off the bottom. The stick in the lower left edge catches the eye.
Registered on April 1, 2010, 196 Posts, 1592 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on May 30, 2012 at 1:30 PM
Thanks for all the suggestions. Here is a repost of a cropped version, lightened up the upper most tufa and removed the stick that was in the lower left.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on May 30, 2012 at 1:32 PM
Also, here is a repost of the original with the dodging in the foreground, again removing the stick and brightening up the upper tufa. As for the pink, I think that was pretty natural, some parts of the tufa formations where white (I'm assuming the new saline buildups) and did catch a pink cast during sunset.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Rudy Ruberti on May 30, 2012 at 5:12 PM
Peter,
Looks like you had some nice conditions for your trip and this is a great Mono shot. I could see a slight crop off the bottom, but still a great image with Pirate Ship Tufa in the background. I was in Mammoth with my son over the weekend for some late season skiing, but didn't get out with the camera. Hope to see some more shots from your trip.
Registered on October 28, 2008, 179 Posts, 1875 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on May 30, 2012 at 6:02 PM
Thanks Rudy, Sounds like you arrived when I was just leaving town. I was amazed the ski area was still open, I didn't think there was that much snow still on the mountain.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Alex Noriega on May 30, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Great comp, Peter! A bit different than the usual take on Mono, and I appreciate that. The warm light/color are fantastic - nicely saturated without being too overboard.

One nit I have is with the foreground rock, I know the light probably wasn't the same on it, but it just seems way less saturated and a lot cooler than the rest of the scene - since it's brighter, it distracts me a bit, as I want to be led through the image to the tufas in the distance. Another option would be a 4:5 or 3:4 crop from the top down, cropping off the bottom of the image, if you didn't want to do any color/brightness manipulations on the FG.

I will also agree with Mark that the top of the upper-left tufa has more darkening than I'd like. In addition, it seems it has a little halo effect going on - not sure if this is because it's darker, or from sharpening, or from a mask that's slightly off..

Overall I love it, very moody, and I love the shape/arrangement of the rocks leading through the image in your composition. Having only seen a few of your images, I'm already able to recognize this from the thumbnail as one of yours via the color handling and composition!

EDIT: Looks like you already posted some revised versions, and others had already posted similar thoughts to mine. Sorry for not reading all the comments before posting.. I would say on your latest revision that I'd still like to see the fg rock darker, although since you say it's natural, maybe you'd prefer to try my crop suggestion. And the halo issue doesn't seem as prevalent anymore on the upper-left tufa, but still seems to be present..
Registered on May 19, 2012, 80 Posts, 195 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on May 30, 2012 at 8:19 PM
Thanks Alex, Glad my images are able to stand apart from the rest. It was funny, because there was a group of about 30 other photographers lined up along one of the shorelines trying to get that "classic" comp of the tufa formations seen in the upper right. I think the haloing was a mixture of both masking and the tone difference which I did notice while going back. I think I am more drawn to the cropped version I posted than the rest of the foreground to really emphasize that rich orange glow.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by John Fan on May 30, 2012 at 8:27 PM
Incredible light.
Registered on August 24, 2010, 135 Posts, 489 Comments
Comment posted by jack jaeger jr on May 30, 2012 at 9:10 PM
Great shot hardly any shadows and great color
Registered on April 2, 2012, 26 Posts, 355 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on May 30, 2012 at 9:12 PM
Thanks Jack, the light was generous and the position I was in enabled me to shoot with minimal shadows.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Dean Sauskojus on May 31, 2012 at 2:03 AM
Beautiful color for sure. Love the clouds and the tufa formations leading to the back of the image. Nice work Peter.

Repost is even better.
Registered on September 29, 2009, 137 Posts, 2659 Comments
Comment posted by Kory Lidstrom on June 2, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Yep, the cropped version is definitely stronger. Now, the emphasis is fully on the beautiful light where it should be.
Registered on November 19, 2008, 49 Posts, 1035 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on June 2, 2012 at 8:42 PM
Thanks Kory, I actually like the cropped version much more now after looking at both of them a few times.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments