Dawning
by Nancy Lea Sandy
the moon sets, the sun begins to rise, a new day dawns. This image was taken awhile after my last post but I think it is much stronger. It was canted a bit to the left in spite of the tripod (note to self...check the bubble) so I leveled it in LR. I have also modified my New Years resolution. It now stands as "all things in moderation" and I touched the sliders. specifically, I desaturated the blues in the snow a bit. Again, brutal honesty is requested and all comments most appreciated.
Canon Rebel T1i
1/1000sec f/4.5 30mm
Thanks for looking
Comments
10 comments- Dan.
Chris
I can see we're all over the place in terms of critiques. Some like the snow drift, others not. Let me just add to the confusion!
Unlike Bill, I prefer the previous moon-rise image over this one; much more dramatic and moody. Compositionally, I'm with Marc here. But to add to his comments I find the snow drift a visual blockade to the soft texture and lovely color of the sky. What I'm getting at is that I wish I could see what was behind the drift and tree.
I do like the patterns in the snow up front and assuming this is your playground, you might want to revisit and try a wide angle comp that emphasizes and showcases some interesting patterns/drifts in the snow.
Not your best me thinks, but still it's not bad either.
Lon