Gallery: FloraPosted October 2, 201127,768 views17 comments
Freestyle.
Material: Anthurium, Nigella, Snowberries.
D90 F14 1/4sec CPL. CS5 Viveza, Websharpner
Is the shadow distracting and is the vignette too strong? Thanks for viewing and C&C appreciated.
Comments
17 comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on October 2, 2011 at 8:50 AM
Black bg.
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Comment posted by Jaymes Dempsey on October 2, 2011 at 9:47 AM
I like the colors a lot, especially with the white bg, it gives it a smooth feel. I like the faint shadows to the right, but the ones just to the left of the vase are slightly distracting. The vignette's good, though!
Really like the arrangement in the vase...beautifully done!
Registered on June 28, 2010, 47 Posts, 590 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Sharp on October 2, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Love this comp, Gary! My eye went to the shadows, so I would call them distracting. I had not seen the vignette until you pointed it out, so I think it is just right. I much prefer the white version over the black background alternative. Beautiful work.
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Comment posted by Monica Siri on October 2, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Beautiful arrangement and very fine comp, Gary. I prefer the white version but the shadows are a bit distracting to me too, in particular those on the vase. The vignette is ok for me. Great work.
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Comment posted by Bob Duff on October 2, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Great arrangement Gary. The image with the white background is my preference. The black BG is just too startk for my tastes. The shadows are a bit distracting but I guess you're stll limited by the studio lighting. The vase is very interesting and the colours of it work really well with the plant material. Is this your vase or a borrowed one from the centre.
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Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on October 2, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Gary, Great arrangement as always. Anthuriums and the Vase steal the show me as do the curved grass fronds. Shadow is a wee bit distracting and the darker version seems a little too dark. I might prefer the original version with subtler or no shadows. The vignette is not a problem as it mirrors the curves from the grass.
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Comment posted by Pat Sampson on October 2, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Beautiful arrangement Gary. I suppose I might consider moving one of the bg snowberris? in front of the grass and the also the top snowberries behind the others. In both cases it gets the stem behind what are to me more interesting elements. (May just be from five years of looking for stems when shooting avian) The balance is wonderful in it.
Great container.
I like the bg shadows but not those on the vase. I like the gradient a lot.
I guess I prefer the lighter bg but it's a hard call for me. Both are very appealing.
This is superb work.
pat
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Comment posted by Carol Hyman on October 2, 2011 at 12:23 PM
Lovely display, Gary. I don't think the shadow is too distract; nor is the vignette too strong. I like your original posting.
Regards,
Carol
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Comment posted by Charlie Baugh on October 2, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Wonderful arrangement I think. I'm glad you gave us multiple versions and would like more, as this, with and without shadows varies pleasantly. Gary you have, it seems to me, a seemingly limitless imagination. Don't let anything limit that.
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Comment posted by Richard Teller on October 2, 2011 at 6:51 PM
Gary, you have a very artistic eye. I appreciated your images very much.
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Comment posted by Morris McClung on October 2, 2011 at 7:26 PM
The arrangement is another wonderful expression of grace. The shadows on the wall add depth, and the vignette could be brought back just a touch. Excellent work, Gary!
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Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on October 2, 2011 at 9:26 PM
Thanks everyone for your comments. Much appreciated.
Bob: The vase belongs to the studio which have >50 very elegant containers.
Pat: The stems of the snowberries curved in the same manner as the leaves but difficult to show on 2D. I think a 3D image of an arrangement would be great and I might do an anaglyph some time in future when I get my hands on a pair of cyan/blue glasses.
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Comment posted by Albert Darmo on October 2, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Hi Gary A marvelous arrangement and composition!!!! Ram said it all,!!! he echoed my exact thoughts about the shadows and vignette
Albert Darmo
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Comment posted by Charlie Baugh on October 2, 2011 at 9:28 PM
These images have brought me back for multiple viewings. This work is absolutely outstanding. You *are* a master.
Charlie
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Comment posted by David W. Kelly on October 3, 2011 at 12:26 PM
I like the shadows, vignette and don't let me forget I also like the image. Great work as usual Gary.
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Comment posted by Craig Strand on October 4, 2011 at 1:14 PM
This is very beautiful Gary, I like it very much and find it smoother flowing and pleasing compared to the one posted that had a single grass bent into a hard rectangular shape. Vase and BG also very tasteful. Nicely done!
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Comment posted by Yiming Hu on October 6, 2011 at 7:34 PM
Gary: another very elegant arrangement! So beautiful and graceful. The shadows on the vase bother a little bit, but everything else is perfect!
Registered on April 28, 2011, 38 Posts, 733 Comments
Comments
17 commentsReally like the arrangement in the vase...beautifully done!
Great container.
I like the bg shadows but not those on the vase. I like the gradient a lot.
I guess I prefer the lighter bg but it's a hard call for me. Both are very appealing.
This is superb work.
pat
Regards,
Carol
Bob: The vase belongs to the studio which have >50 very elegant containers.
Pat: The stems of the snowberries curved in the same manner as the leaves but difficult to show on 2D. I think a 3D image of an arrangement would be great and I might do an anaglyph some time in future when I get my hands on a pair of cyan/blue glasses.
Albert Darmo
Charlie