Ibis
by Barbara Graham
Canon EOS REBEL T2i
EF-S55-250mm f/4-5.6 IS
6/22/2011 – 8:02:49 AM
1/320 sec
Aperture priority
f/9
ISO 400
Focal length 240 mm
Handheld
Harris Neck NWR, Georgia
Raw file processed in Photoshop Elements 9, cropped from top for composition, 64% of full frame, still on the laptop monitor
A big part of this image to me is the habitat, which I really like. All feedback on whether this bird-in-habitat shot, the crop, etc. works for you or what you might do differently would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!
Comments
10 commentsI like your choice of composition leaving more space open on the LH side of the frame, and if this were mine I would probably crop in a bit more from the RH side to give this further emphasis and make more of a rectangular shaped crop; I'm one of those that seldom find squarish crops work well, though this is more a personal preference than anything else ;^)
The weakest part of the image is the foreground. The vegetation here is not as lush nor is it in focus. If you are going to include material like this in the frame I think it would be better to have it darker and/or sharper so it isn't as much of a distraction from the main subject. Stopping down the lens for more DOF, and putting the camera on a tripod to permit the slower shutter speed that would need, would be appropriate in such a situation.
I like this one very much. The suggestions about the FG are good ones. Perhaps you could have moved to your right some to avoid those 2 spikes sticking up. It is easy to overlook these things in the excitment of getting a good image. Happens to me all the time. Larger image is very nice. Thanks for sharing.
Having said that it might be worth looking at cropping off the foreground OOF part. That would still leave the blades of grass going up into the frame. They would have to be carefully removed and I don't know what the tools available in Elements 9 are.
Peter
cheers, Dennis