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Ibis

by Barbara Graham

Gallery: AvianPosted June 28, 2011184 views10 comments
Canon EOS REBEL T2i
EF-S55-250mm f/4-5.6 IS
6/22/2011 – 8:02:49 AM
1/320 sec
Aperture priority
f/9
ISO 400
Focal length 240 mm
Handheld
Harris Neck NWR, Georgia
Raw file processed in Photoshop Elements 9, cropped from top for composition, 64% of full frame, still on the laptop monitor

A big part of this image to me is the habitat, which I really like. All feedback on whether this bird-in-habitat shot, the crop, etc. works for you or what you might do differently would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!

Comments

10 comments
Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on June 29, 2011 at 1:16 AM
I very much like the bird-in-natural-habitat feel of this shot Barbara, and although judging by the apparent distance between you and the Ibis and the shorter distance between the Ibis and the background this would have been hard to achieve even with the most expensive of lenses, I think a shot like this works much better when the background is more blurred.

I like your choice of composition leaving more space open on the LH side of the frame, and if this were mine I would probably crop in a bit more from the RH side to give this further emphasis and make more of a rectangular shaped crop; I'm one of those that seldom find squarish crops work well, though this is more a personal preference than anything else ;^)
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on June 29, 2011 at 1:36 AM
IMO this is your best and most interesting image to date. I love the lush feel of the setting - the saturated colors and heavy growth give this a primitive feel. I am glad that the background greenery is sharp and within the DOF - it would be impossible to render it as a featureless expanse and would only look distracting if partially OOF. When the subject is close to the plants behind I find it much better to have everything in focus rather than major parts of the composition slightly out of focus.

The weakest part of the image is the foreground. The vegetation here is not as lush nor is it in focus. If you are going to include material like this in the frame I think it would be better to have it darker and/or sharper so it isn't as much of a distraction from the main subject. Stopping down the lens for more DOF, and putting the camera on a tripod to permit the slower shutter speed that would need, would be appropriate in such a situation.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by John Tobias on June 29, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Barbara,

I like this one very much. The suggestions about the FG are good ones. Perhaps you could have moved to your right some to avoid those 2 spikes sticking up. It is easy to overlook these things in the excitment of getting a good image. Happens to me all the time. Larger image is very nice. Thanks for sharing.
Registered on September 12, 2009, 2120 Posts, 6455 Comments
Comment posted by Ron Dudley on June 29, 2011 at 9:27 AM
This image has a lot of appeal for me Barbara. I love the setting and the sharpness of the background works very well for me. I like where you've placed the ibis in the frame and the whites look good. I enjoy the perch too. Nicely done.
Registered on March 30, 2007, 437 Posts, 10915 Comments
Comment posted by Alan Murphy on June 29, 2011 at 6:20 PM
Love the sense of place in this image. A bit off the right would improve the comp for me.
Registered on December 3, 2003, 192 Posts, 739 Comments
Comment posted by Sharon Hallowell on June 29, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Nice colors and detail and I love birds sittin' on a big ol' stump like this! Your best so far! Congrats. Sharon
Registered on November 1, 2003, 392 Posts, 4810 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Conway on June 29, 2011 at 9:47 PM
Barbara, I completely agree with Richard.

Having said that it might be worth looking at cropping off the foreground OOF part. That would still leave the blades of grass going up into the frame. They would have to be carefully removed and I don't know what the tools available in Elements 9 are.

Peter
Registered on June 25, 2007, 347 Posts, 3913 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on June 29, 2011 at 10:04 PM
I love the large dof in this, Barbara. The habitat is wonderful and the bird provides the needed focal point for the scene. The oof foreground really doesn't bother me, though I think you could crop some off both bottom and top-lots of different ways to treat this one.
:toast:
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Gatlin on July 2, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Barbara, I agree with Rich's comments. I really like this image. really nice setting and overall feel. I'd consider a little off the right and bottom for the comp, but also like it as presented.
Registered on March 21, 2009, 202 Posts, 4187 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Binda on July 3, 2011 at 4:44 PM
I like it the way it is, it actually gives you something to look at instead of seeing just another bird big in the frame

cheers, Dennis :toast:
Registered on September 8, 2007, 56 Posts, 326 Comments