Gallery: WildlifePosted March 19, 201162 views5 comments
Canon EOS 550d 18-55mm
NIght shot using macro, hope i get some constructive criticism.
Zaccaria
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5 comments
Comment posted by John Tobias on March 19, 2011 at 5:18 PM
Zaccaria, good image for a night macro. What was your light source? IMHO it is cropped too tight. It might just be my preference. I would like to have seen the head of the salamander more visible. Thanks for sharing.
Registered on September 12, 2009, 2120 Posts, 6455 Comments
Comment posted by Johan Malmros on March 20, 2011 at 6:26 AM
I agree with John about the crop. I would have liked to see the tip of the tail and a bit more room in front to crawl into.
Nice panoramic aspect. It really emphasizes the wave shape of the salamander's moving body.
Registered on January 6, 2011, 20 Posts, 154 Comments
Comment posted by Brad Hill on March 20, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Hi Zaccaria,
I'm in agreement with the comments of both John and Johan. One other comment - while the striking pattern of the salamander helps it stand out, there are still a lot of other "distracting" elements in this shot. One of the biggest challenges of macro photography - and wildlife photography in general - is capturing "clean" images where distractions are minimized. Tough to do in this situation...but always something to strive for.
Cheers...
Brad
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Comment posted by richard remington on March 21, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Zaccaria,
I love the amazing colors and pano crop. My only nit is the brown leaf which is distracting. Other than that this is a winner.
Rick
Registered on March 12, 2010, 105 Posts, 368 Comments
Comment posted by Zaccaria Exhenry on March 23, 2011 at 8:24 AM
The light sources was the normal flash integrated in the camera because i wasn't planning on this picture. as for the "distracting" elements such as the grass and leaves, this was sort of a hurry picture because the salamanders are kind of rare and it was moving quickly away from me. Maybe next time ill get more lucky with the back ground :D
Registered on January 21, 2011, 14 Posts, 36 Comments
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5 commentsNice panoramic aspect. It really emphasizes the wave shape of the salamander's moving body.
I'm in agreement with the comments of both John and Johan. One other comment - while the striking pattern of the salamander helps it stand out, there are still a lot of other "distracting" elements in this shot. One of the biggest challenges of macro photography - and wildlife photography in general - is capturing "clean" images where distractions are minimized. Tough to do in this situation...but always something to strive for.
Cheers...
Brad
PS: Please don't hesitate to jump in and comment on the images of others - I know the recommended ratio of 5 comments for every image post can be tough to maintain, but getting a little closer to this comment:image ratio would be appreciated. I know many newer members are a little hesitant to leave comments, but ultimately the success of all the galleries are determined largely by the comments members leave on the images that are posted. And, I'm sure you'll find that once you get into the regular practice of creating your own critiques that you'll think more about, and improve, your own photography.
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Zaccaria,
I love the amazing colors and pano crop. My only nit is the brown leaf which is distracting. Other than that this is a winner.
Rick