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The Culmination
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The Culmination

by Jared Atencio

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 27, 2011894 views44 comments
This is a pretty popular location just north of the Golden Gate Bridge in SF. We have had an unusually warm and dry Jan. here in the Bay Area, so on this particular day I was happy to see clouds! The stacks in this are a very dark rock (sorry, I'm no geologist) so I intentionally left them extremely dark, and the sand is very dark here as well, which really helps the wave motion and foam stand out. Any comments or critiques on how to improve this image are always appreciated. Thanks in advance!

Canon 5dmkii
Canon 17-40L
Singh-ray reverse ND
3 exposures blended (one for FG waves, 2 for clouds/focus)
Minor work in ACR (sharpening/noise/wb)
PS work included setting W&B points, Selective D&B, and slight color adjustments

Comments

44 comments
Comment posted by John Mumaw on January 27, 2011 at 9:14 PM
This is simply spectacular, Jared! The sweeping curve around that rock in the foreground contrasts so well with the waves. Everything here just fits perfectly. An organic, well thought out composition!
Yeah, it could use a bit more room on the right, and perhaps toning down the two bright patches betwen the rock and the stack, but those are by no means deal killers for me.
This is one of the best ocean images I've seen in some time...congratulations! :toast:
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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on January 27, 2011 at 9:42 PM
Wow! Comp and light just won't let go.
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Comment posted by Wayne Jones on January 27, 2011 at 9:44 PM
We see a lot of scenes somewhat similar to this one, but rarely is the sky this gorgeous, and that unique curve of FG foam really puts this comp in a class by itself! The darkness of the stacks works well in this situation. Excellent planning, execution and processing.
Registered on April 18, 2007, 953 Posts, 6435 Comments
Comment posted by dean hebert on January 27, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Great shot, I love the wave motion! I could use a bit of detail in the nearest stack but I'm ok with it as-is. It could almost be an alien skull in the surf! :toast:
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Comment posted by Phillip Noll on January 27, 2011 at 10:45 PM
Incredible! :eek: I'm speechless! :toast: :toast:
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Comment posted by Michael J Greene, on January 27, 2011 at 10:45 PM
The foreground and comp are amazing Jared. Incredible work. I love the processing too. To be picky - the sky is a bit dark for my tastes and there is a slightly halo around the large sea stack on the right. You might to burn down the brightest reflected highlights in the water to match the color of the sky. All small nits though...Congrats bro! You rock!

Michael :toast:
Registered on June 18, 2009, 86 Posts, 2317 Comments
Comment posted by Art Escobado on January 27, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Solid!!!! Man - you're posting some fantastic stuff lately Jared. I would like to see the large rock to the right brightened up, it looks too black on my monitor. Sky could be brighter- but small nits cause you nailed the comp!! Can't wait to see the website. :toast:
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Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on January 27, 2011 at 11:20 PM
Wonderful image and unique!
Great colors, and the swirling water is joyous.
Sandy
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Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on January 28, 2011 at 12:39 AM
Outstanding composition, water action, and light. I love it! I do think the light fall off/ gradient in the sky is too strong. I might brighten the upper portion of the sky a little more.

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Harding on January 28, 2011 at 1:53 AM
Wow! For me this is a perfectly balanced composition with just the right amount of water movement and a great sky. I would suggest that you could try to lighten it a little because its very natural for the highlights to blow out when shooting towards the sun like this and it might also improve the sky.
Registered on January 19, 2011, 33 Posts, 408 Comments
Comment posted by Abdullaziz Bin Ali on January 28, 2011 at 2:01 AM
Excellent Jared,
the light is awesome
love the shutter speed
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Comment posted by Andreas Resch on January 28, 2011 at 2:12 AM
Quite an impressive shot, Jared. Everything's in the right place here.
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Comment posted by James Fougère on January 28, 2011 at 3:06 AM
Awesome shot, great light !! It is nice to be in the right place at the right time :)
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Comment posted by Balakumar Kaushik on January 28, 2011 at 3:32 AM
Very natural looking image Jared. Great light. The receding water circling the FG rock looks lovely.
Lovely silhouette and the especially the warm light reflected off the beach looks beautiful.
:toast:
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Comment posted by Arild Heitmann on January 28, 2011 at 6:59 AM
Jared, this is phenomenal! Absolutely in love the motion in the foreground. The dark rocks and water suits this scene perfectly!
Registered on October 13, 2010, 27 Posts, 378 Comments
Comment posted by Eric Mannino on January 28, 2011 at 8:35 AM
Great capture Jarrrod. I like it as is especially the silhouetted stacks and the amazing sky. :toast:
Registered on November 16, 2009, 22 Posts, 65 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Maile on January 28, 2011 at 9:14 AM
That's a stunner, no doubt Jared, congrats!
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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on January 28, 2011 at 9:19 AM
Beautiful. I love the water motion and that sky is fantastic!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
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Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on January 28, 2011 at 9:50 AM
echo what Wayne said. Kudo's
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Lorna Taylor on January 28, 2011 at 10:02 AM
An outstanding image, beautifully handled. Wonderful light. Stunning!
Registered on November 12, 2010, 254 Posts, 3083 Comments
Comment posted by Robert Dayton on January 28, 2011 at 10:19 AM
I like everything about this, Jared--the light, the formations, the colors, and
the wave motion.
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Comment posted by Joel Hazelton on January 28, 2011 at 11:12 AM
:toast: :toast: :toast:
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Comment posted by Walt Sterneman on January 28, 2011 at 11:18 AM
This is wonderful Jared. The light was really great and I love the way you've hidden the setting sun behind the rock. Lovely!
Registered on March 24, 2010, 73 Posts, 1268 Comments
Comment posted by Gary McGhee on January 28, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Terrific shot Jared, comp is spot on. The silhouetted sea stacks look great against the sky. Love the foreground too, nice movement in the sea/wave.

Gary.
Registered on April 15, 2010, 142 Posts, 2416 Comments
Comment posted by Jared Atencio on January 28, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Thank you for the comments and feedback everyone :toast:

Michael, I def wanted a darker feel to this, but agree that the sky could be a bit lighter up top. Good eye also on the highlights in the water matching the sky. As for the haloing, there was no blending done around the rocks whatsoever, so I think that's just the natural radiance of the sun setting behind the rock, but DO see the haloing you're referring to-thanks for the suggestions.

Art-thanks also. These rocks were a type of black rock and from my vantage point on this day, I could not make out any details with my naked eye, so just kept them black. Looking at the histo again, I think they are a little darker than what I intended (I wanted them VERY dark but not clipped), so can stand to lighten them a tad.

Thank you everyone else!
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Comment posted by Rodney Ninow on January 28, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Easily one of the best seastack images I have ever seen. Nicely done!
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Comment posted by Rick Lundh on January 28, 2011 at 12:56 PM
Beautiful is all I have to say. Well, I just cant stop at that. The FG comp and light is exceptional!
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Comment posted by Loulou Beavers on January 28, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Wow...and wow!
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Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on January 28, 2011 at 4:36 PM
This is gorgeous. Beautiful light and comp. :toast:
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Comment posted by Gary Crabbe on January 28, 2011 at 5:49 PM
I've seen many nice shots of these rocks, and this is certainly one of them. An excellent capture.
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Comment posted by Jason Scanlan on January 28, 2011 at 7:03 PM
That is gorgeous
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Comment posted by Stan Rose on January 28, 2011 at 7:34 PM
Awesome shot, Jared! Loved the sky and surf action here. One minor suggestion--id try burning/darkening the brightest spot in the reflection (could brighten the sky, but the detail is good there) It just looks a bit odd that there is a bright vertical line in the surf when the bright line in the sky is off at an angle to the right, if that makes sense. Everything else looks great to me. :toast:
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Comment posted by Yan Zhang on January 29, 2011 at 12:56 AM
Wow, a stunning shot! The sky and swirl waves really make the picture outstanding.
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Comment posted by Steve Sieren on January 29, 2011 at 2:51 AM
Very purdy sunset! congrats :toast:
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Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on January 29, 2011 at 5:10 AM
Definitely an eye catcher. My knee-jerk response is really cranked on the contrast and color. Also ccw tilt. Love the comp and motion. Nice catch!

aF
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Comment posted by Morris McClung on January 29, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Great comp and just an application of the suggestions will make this a masterpiece!
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Comment posted by Craig Myers on January 29, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Just great! :toast:
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Comment posted by Igor J. Zaleski on January 29, 2011 at 2:57 PM
What can I say? the silhouette of the rock, the stunning colors of sky, the curve of the wave in FG - everything looks great alone and together create a perfect composition. Congratulations!

Igor
Registered on January 19, 2011, 17 Posts, 51 Comments
Comment posted by Shane McDermott on January 29, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Jared, this is gorgeous! Love the lines, colors and textures, there is so much going on, but it has great flow and compositional balance.

Shane :toast: :toast:
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Comment posted by Mark Metternich on January 29, 2011 at 3:38 PM
Excellent. :toast:

Personally I would ditch the ND's and bracket and blend and not have the top quite as dark (black/purplish).

Still a great shot, congrats.

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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on January 29, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Stunning light and colo Jared!
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Comment posted by Alex Mody on January 30, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Great light, and great job exposing and composing. I might wish to see a horizontal.
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Comment posted by Geoffrey Baker on January 30, 2011 at 3:41 PM
This is an excellent image which can be made even better with a few minor adjustments.
The sky's reflection on the water shouldn't be lighter than the sky itself.
There's a halo around the rocks.
What a wonderful sight it must have been.
Well done.

Geoff.
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Comment posted by Stuart Williams on January 31, 2011 at 1:15 AM
superb comp and deep rich colours. i might brighten a little and tap back the contrast slider just a touch ... that's personal preference though!
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