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Sleigh Dust

by Jared Atencio

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 3, 2011273 views17 comments
I was awaken early on Christmas morning to a hungry dog and a slight headache from a wee too much eggnog the night before. After feeding the dog, I peaked out the window and was surprised to see that the previous nights rainstorms had parted just enough to allow the first rays of Christmas sunlight to begin illuminating the undersides of these layered clouds. The Mrs. was still sleeping, so I decided to make a run for it to try and catch at least a portion of this sunrise. I arrived at my go-to spot with just enough time to get off about 6 shots before the color quickly fizzled out.

This was shot in Pacific Grove, CA, from the tip of the peninsula looking back across the Monterey Bay toward Castroville and Marina. As always, I appreciate any honest feedback or critique on how to improve this image or technique in the field. Thanks in Advance!

Tech Notes:
Canon 5dmkii
Canon 17-40mm f/4 L
2 shots @ f/8 blended by hand for focus
ISO 250 (to maintain proper exposure for wave motion and reduce cloud movement)
Curves adjustments in PS to balance exposure using TK's Lum. Masks
Slight color adjustments in PS
TK's Vib and Sat Masks

Comments

17 comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on January 3, 2011 at 5:31 PM
Welcome to ESS Jared. This is extremely nice - excellent comp. Love the FG texture and shutter speed and thesky is killer. Well done.
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Comment posted by Art Escobado on January 3, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Nice shot Jared-the colors look well done. :toast:
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Comment posted by Michael J Greene, on January 3, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Awesome work Jared. I hope you had a great holiday. The sky and processing both look excellent. You might consider slightly lightening up the left hand side of the sky to balance the scene more. Very impressive. I hope this helps.

Michael
Registered on June 18, 2009, 86 Posts, 2317 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on January 3, 2011 at 5:59 PM
Beautiful, Jared. The foreground and reflection looks great, and I really love that sky! Nice work.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
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Comment posted by Wayne Willison on January 3, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Really nice. I like how the sky colors reflect off the sand and rocks.
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Comment posted by Peter Richter on January 3, 2011 at 6:09 PM
The tangible stones in the foreground are a significant counterpoint to the weightless illuminated clouds; all this interacting with the movement of the sea makes it a great shot!

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by Art Escobado on January 3, 2011 at 7:06 PM
Nice shot Jared-the colors look well done. :toast:
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Comment posted by Doug Roane on January 3, 2011 at 8:01 PM
excellent, Jared. I love the crispness in the clouds and your choice not to make the fg too bright - great mood going on here!
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Comment posted by John Mumaw on January 3, 2011 at 8:12 PM
Beautiful evening seascape nicely composed, Jared. 'Development' is spot on, too. No nits from me at all.
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Comment posted by David Moynahan on January 3, 2011 at 8:22 PM
gorgeous. that sky is something!
Registered on December 11, 2010, 11 Posts, 77 Comments
Comment posted by Jared Atencio on January 3, 2011 at 9:21 PM
Thanks for the feedback all!

Michael, when viewing a small thumbnail of the image on my iphone, I could clearly see the unbalanced light. The scene was naturally unbalanced, but I will try to balance the LHS a bit and to see if it gives the image more impact. Thanks for the suggestion and happy holidays to you as well :toast:
Registered on June 23, 2009, 21 Posts, 422 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on January 3, 2011 at 9:46 PM
This is really nice, Jared. The clouds and water textures certainly keep the interest high and the subtle reflection of the sky in the water and on the rock add credibility (something not all images have anymore.) A scroll crop to just be low the light portion of the sky yields a very nice comp too.
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Comment posted by James Fougère on January 3, 2011 at 10:40 PM
Awesome sky , and nice color :biggrin:
Registered on October 25, 2010, 41 Posts, 831 Comments
Comment posted by Gino Cortez on January 4, 2011 at 12:43 AM
I really like the colors at work here! :toast:
Registered on November 23, 2010, 57 Posts, 396 Comments
Comment posted by Koveh Tavakkol on January 4, 2011 at 12:57 AM
Really nice my friend.. form the clouds down to the foreground and wave motion. Processing also looks spot on.
Registered on September 1, 2009, 41 Posts, 608 Comments
Comment posted by Arild Heitmann on January 4, 2011 at 3:16 AM
That sky is absolutely fantastic! Great comp too...

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Comment posted by Aaron Burdick on January 10, 2011 at 5:00 PM
Wonderful! Processing is top notch. Love the comp.
Registered on May 1, 2009, 31 Posts, 197 Comments