Meditation Rock

Gallery: LandscapePosted October 4, 2010134 views4 comments

Canon Rebel XT 10-22mm
Jon Fuller-Moab,Ut photo guide
Canyonlands, Ut March 2009 sunrise

Morning Journey

I set and ponder the days that I wonder.
Meteorite flys by, a billion years come back to me.
Earth is alive but so sterile.
Sunrise, its blood orange glow, luminacity earth and sky.
Clarity fills my heart and eyes.
Young Bobcate runs across my path.
Wonderlust, compositions are a billion and counting.

Jay Miller

Comments

4 comments

Comment posted by Russell Colletta on October 4, 2010 at 8:36 PM

Great spot, great moment. Including the missing piece from the bottom of the rock might give a better comp IMO. Great foreground detail.

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Comment posted by Mark Pelton on October 4, 2010 at 9:43 PM

I really like this subject and composition. Not a bad poet either.

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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on October 5, 2010 at 3:10 PM

The comp and light are working nicely. Pulling a little cyan/blue out here would bring in some additional warmth to the frame. That would be my preference, but understand that others might see it differently.

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Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on October 5, 2010 at 11:53 PM

The hard thing to do with these type shots is, get the tops of the near buttes/mesas to be higher, or lower than the tops of the distant ones. I think there needs to be some relief there. Aside from that this works fine for me. Might like some drama, or colorful sky.

Chris

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