My main reason for visitng the Sand Dunes last week was to see the sunflowers that appear in the dunefield every summer. I spent about an hour shooting this one flower; the light was changing virtually every second with the clouds passing overhead. I waited for a cloud to put the entire fg in shadows for this shot, while the distant dunes and mountains were still fully in sunlight.
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EDIT: a vertical added for Moshen
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33 commentswow the first version, really a softness
RP
John
Thank you for looking for this kind of events
Roberto
The mid-fg and all that space is quite intentional, it's not supposed to connect the flower to the bg, its supposed to isolate it. Thanks for the feedback, i appreciate all opinions!
I like everything about this. Maybe, i dont know, I would have lowered the viewpoint to allow a bit more of sand at the bottom and a bit more of sky, reducing the mid distance expanse of sand a little?
Wonderful shot Stan...
Mohsen deserves this dedication
Nice work Stan!
While I see where you were headed here, my problem is that I remember some of your prior shots. My preference would be to totally disconnect the sunflower by just removing the background, or connect it as noted above. Your prior shots of just "sand and sunflower" set the bar with these.
Well done, Stan, and thanks for sharing.
I like both images presented together - I think they compliment each other very well. If I had to chose one, I like the vertical better because of the color of the sand and sky, although the overall light is better in the horizontal version. On the horizontal, what I don't understand is the placement of the sunflower so close to the edge of the fg. For some who preaches the rule of thirds, this seems to be slightly out-of-character. Overall, I think a longer focal length would have been better to compress the space in that version.
I really do like the vertical much better. The flower takes on a much greater presence as does the sky and the composition is more pleasing to my eye. However, it would have been nice to have the top of the flower clearly underneath the horizion line instead of right on it. (That's a very minor nit however)
Overall, these images represent the incredible amount of work and beauty you've captured at the Great Sand Dunes NP. It is certainly a testament to your artistic skill and love of the area.
Michael
A very well crafted landscape that does work very well in isolating this lone sunflower from the grander landscape. I like the amount of space you've given to the far mountains and sky. And your timing is perfect.
I am wishing for a skosh more room beneath the flower - in fact even if it just wasn't barely merging with the bottom I might be happier. But then it doesn't matter if I'm happy - you need to be happy with it. Personally, I think you had some stronger images of this type from last summer or previous years, but this one stands quite nicely on it's own.
Lon
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
I also wish there was a bit more space at the bottom of the image - the flower petals almost seem cut off at the very edge a little.... The light on the 2nd version is not nearly as interesting as in the 1st.... still lovely.
I do wish the flower was in the bottom left 3rds position though.
Marc--actually the best ive seen is John Wellers night shot (flower illuminated in headlamp) but i havent figured out a way to top him yet....
Stan, I would not have wasted my time.
Have a nice day, Ross